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Does travel broaden the mind? Nowadays, people travel a lot. In this essay I'm going to talk about how good is travel to a different country. Everybody knows that travel is a perfect activity in different ways, but why? In my opinion when the people decide to travel, they learn different things, like culture or improve languages... So, first, in the cultural field, when you travel to a different country, you learn about different customs, as I see it, is an enriching experience, also, you can taste new foods, and learn how prepare it. I'm sure that when people travel, search differents monuments to see, because is an important thing when you visit a place that you've never seen, but some people prefer try new activities, like learn a typical sport, In my view it's a good experience too. We must not forget, that we can talk with people with different beliefs, and learn or improve languages if you go to a foreign country. In conclusion, I am conviced that travel broaden the mind, because you learn lot of things, and I think that we must promote travels, specially to young people.
Apr 18, 2015 7:16 PM
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Does travelling broaden the mind?

Nowadays, people travel a lot. In this essay I'm going to talk about how it is good is to travel to a different country.
Everybody knows that travelling is a perfect activity in different ways, but why?
In my opinion when the people decide to travel, they learn different things, like culture or improve languages...
So, first, in the cultural field, when you travel to a different country, you learn about different customs and I see it as is an enriching experience, also, you can taste new foods, and learn how to prepare it.
I'm sure that when people travel, they search for differents monuments to see, because it is an important thing to do when you visit a place that you've never seen, but some people prefer to try new activities, like learn a typical sport, in my view it's a good experience too.
We must not forget, that we can talk with people with different beliefs, and learn or improve languages if you go to a foreign country.

In conclusion, I am conviced that travelling broadens the mind, because you learn lot of things, and I think that we must promote travelling, especially to young people.

April 18, 2015
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