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necesito que alguien me corrija esto el tema de la redacion es abre tu mente viajando I think that travel have a lot of adventages You can improving the language , you can have many experience with another culture or meet new people. Travelling abroad is one of the best and most enriching experiences that every student can have , noy only lear languages from the best , but also know other cultures , other people , and learn to speak fluently and handle yourself in a myriad of situation In addition to personal enrichment , we must not forget the academi enrichment and language that today is almost essencial to finding a job that deserves aome punishment , especially if that language is english
Apr 18, 2015 8:13 PM
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necesito que alguien me corrija esto el tema de la redacion es abre tu mente viajando

 

I thibjbthatvthere are many advantages to traveling. traveling can help you improve your language and it provides opportunities to experience another culture different from your own and meet new people. traveling abroad is one of the best and most exciting experiences that a student can have , not only to learn other languages but to be exposed to new cultures and meet new people. traveling abroad gives you the opportunity to develop fluency and it gives you the tools you need to handle yourself in a myriad of situations. 

In addition to personal enrichment , we must not forget the academic enrichment and language benefits that come from traveling abroad. in today's day and age these skills that you develop are becoming essential to finding a job. 

April 19, 2015

necesito que alguien me corrija esto el tema de la redacion es abre tu mente viajando

I think that traveling has a lot of adventages. 
You can improving the language, you can have many experiences with another cultures or meet new people.
Travelling abroad is one of the best and most enriching experiences that every student can have , not only learning languages from the best , but also knowing other cultures, other people, and learning to speak fluently and handle yourself in a myriad of situation
In addition to personal enrichment, we must not forget the academic enrichment and language that today is almost essencial to finding a job that deserves some punishment , especially if that language is English.

April 19, 2015
"finding a job that deserves some punishment". What does this mean?
April 18, 2015
Good ... that's true
April 18, 2015
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