Alberto Salazar
My favorite recipes Please correct my writing if anything is wrong. My favorite recipes. One of my favorite recipe is the ‘’enchiladas verdes’’. As cooked the ‘’enchiladas verdes’’. Get the following ingredients: 1 one kilo of tortillas, 1 one kilo of green tomatoes, 1 one chicken breast sheredded, ½ half kilo cream, 1 one teaspoon of salt, 5 five Serrano chiles, ¼ quarter of onion, 1 one clove garlic, ½ half Oaxaca cheese or manchego and 1 one liter of cooking oil. Utensils. 1 one pan, 1 one frying pan, 1 one spatula, 1 one blender. Preparation. First be baked the chicken and once ready should shredded, then cook the green tomatoes in the pan and as they are boiled put in the blender with onion, garlic, chiles and add salt and mix well. Then fry the tortillas in the pan with cooking oil, put the fried tortillas on plates and form tacos with chicken, pour the sauce from the blender and serve with cream and cheese to taste . Eat and enjoy. Greetings from México.
Apr 18, 2015 11:01 PM
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My favorite recipes

Please correct my writing if anything is wrong.
My favorite recipes.
One of my favorite recipe is the ‘’enchiladas verdes’’.
As cooked the ‘’enchiladas verdes’’.
Get the following ingredients:
1 one kilo of tortillas, 1 one kilo of green tomatoes, 1 one chicken breast shredded, ½ half kilo cream, 1 one teaspoon of salt, 5 five Serrano chilies, ¼ quarter of onion, 1 one clove garlic clove, ½ half Oaxaca cheese or manchego, and 1 one liter of cooking oil.

Utensils. 
1 (one) pan, 1 (one) frying pan, 1 (one) spatula, 1 (one) blender.
Preparation.
First bake the chicken and, once ready, should shred it. Then cook the green tomatoes in the pan and, as they are boiled, put in the blender with the onion, garlic, chilies and add salt and mix well. Then, fry the tortillas in the pan with cooking oil, put the fried tortillas on plates and form tacos with chicken, pour the sauce from the blender and serve with cream and cheese to taste .
Eat and enjoy.
Greetings from Mexico.

You do not use pans to boil. Pots are for boiling, pans and for frying/searing 
You do not need to add 'one' when you have the number 1 in front, but you can add () to clarify.

Before nouns like "onion" you need "the". 

No accent of the "e" of Mexico in English.
Greetings from America :) 

April 19, 2015
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My favorite recipes

Please correct my writing if anything is wrong.
My favorite recipes.
One of my favorite recipe is the ‘’enchiladas verdes’’.
As cooked How to cook the ‘’enchiladas verdes’’.
Get the following ingredients:
1 one kilo of tortillas, 1 one kilo of green tomatoes, 1 one chicken breast sheredded, ½ half kilo cream, 1 one teaspoon of salt, 5 five Serrano chiles peppers, ¼ quarter of onion, 1 one clove garlic, ½ half Oaxaca cheese or manchego and 1 one liter of cooking oil.

Utensils.
1 one pan, 1 one frying pan, 1 one spatula, 1 one blender. (I'm not sure why you repeated all of the numbers)
Preparation.
First be baked bake the chicken and once ready should shredded shred it, then cook the green tomatoes in the pan and as once they are boiled put them in the blender with the onion, garlic, and chiles peppers and add salt and mix well. Then fry the tortillas in the pan with cooking oil, put the fried tortillas on plates and form tacos with the chicken, pour the sauce from the blender and serve with cream and cheese to taste .
Eat and enjoy.
Greetings from México.

April 19, 2015
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