My town!

I live in a little small town, called Cotija its is the name, it's that is very famous for its the old cheese and its the MEZCAL, (a very hard liquor). Cotija it's is a town between mountains, and the wether its is very nice here. The mainly main activity is the sugarcane planting, or other vegetables. It It's perfect to ride bicyble in the rural zones.
The people its are very homely, and we have many traditions. Unfortunately, the Michoacan state its is very affected in the economy, and much many people leave are leaving the town…
But well... we need to be the change that we want to see... ;)

Yo creo que deberías escribir en la sesión Inglés, para que los nativos puedan ver.

My town!

I live in a little town, called Cotija its name, that is/which is it's very famous for its old cheese and its MEZCAL (a very hard liquor). It is cotija it's ("it's" emplies possession) a town between mountains, and the weather is wether its very nice. The main mainly activity is the sugarcane planting (is planting sugar cane), or/and other vegetables. It is perfect to ride a bicycle in the rural zones.

The people are its very homely, and we have many traditions. Unfortunately, the Michoacan State is its very affected by in the economy, and many much people leave the town… (are currently leaving the town... )

but well... we need to be the change that we want to see... ;)

Very good job! Just small errors :]