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Fatherland All person on over the world have the fatherland which we were born, grown up and there was many childhood memories. My fatherland is poor village in Vietnam. When I was primary school, I did not have bicycle to going school. Sole street which lead us to school is track through many fields. Subsequent to is a few small streams. In the summer, cool water was wonderful, they made us better after along walking. However, in the winter, that's terrible time for passing. I didn't know computer, modern technology...My childhood was the field, paper- kite, stream, forest and the river. After time for school, we had to work on the field with gleaning paddy after crop. I sent my wishes on the paper-kite, let the windy stole a kiss on my hair and release my yearming got out of the field to see another place.
Apr 19, 2015 4:15 AM
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Fatherland

All person on People all over the world have a fatherland in which they were born, grown up raised and there was formed many childhood memories. My fatherland is a poor village in Vietnam. When I was in primary school, I did not have a bicycle to going ride to school. Sole street which lead us to school is track through many fields. (I don't understand this sentence) Subsequent Adjacent to is it were a few small streams. In the summer, the cool water was wonderful, they it made us feel better after along walking (either 'walking' or 'a long walk' or 'walking along' but not 'along walking'). However, in the winter, that's a terrible time for passing walking outdoors. I didn't know wasn't familiar with a computer, or modern technology...My childhood was spent in the field, flying paper kites, and playing in streams, forests and the river. After time for school When school ended for the day, we had to work on in the field with a gleaning paddy to harvest the crop. I sent would send my wishes on the paper kite, and let the windy stole wind steal a kiss on my hair and release my yearming got to get out of the field to see another place.

April 19, 2015

Fatherland

All persons all over the world,have a fatherland,where they were born,grew up,and have many fond memories.,of their early childhood.My fatherland was a poor village in Vn
In early school,i had no bicycle,and had to walk through fields, and over streams to get to school.It was easy in the summer,but much more difficult in the winter.
There were no computers or similiar technology at that time.....Fields,streams,and my paper kites were my life in my early days,and i will cherish the memories forever.
After school we had to work in the rice fields.I Sent my wishes on a paper kite in those times

April 21, 2015
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