在欧洲旅行 Travelling in Europe
在欧洲旅行
我们的女儿还很小，所以我们现在不出国旅行。不过我们过去常常喜欢去别的欧洲国家旅行。我们住在欧洲南部的西班牙。 西班牙附近有很多美丽的地方。我们最喜欢意大利。我觉得意大利的文化很有趣。意大利菜好吃，老城市很漂亮，天气好，咖啡是最好的。意大利语跟西班牙语很相似。我懂点意大利语，所以语言没问题。当我们在意大利时我们参观了很多漂亮的教堂、博物馆和美术馆。那里有很多历史。
西班牙离法国很近。我们过去常常在法国南部旅行。法国的乡村景色很漂亮。有很多中世纪的城堡和教堂。我老婆会说法语。虽然法国菜好吃但是对我们来说很贵，咖啡不太好喝。
我们以前也在西班牙旅行。西班牙北方菜很好吃，有高山，旧城市很有魅力。西班牙南方伊斯兰文化很有意思。清真寺非常漂亮。
葡萄牙也离西班牙很近，葡萄牙的城市既漂亮又便宜。
我也喜欢在爱尔兰和苏格兰旅行。乡村景色很美丽、宁静。农庄和耕地很安静。虽然天气不好但山和森林都很绿。
Travelling in Europe.
Now our daughter is small, so we aren’t traveling abroad. However we used to like visiting other European countries. We live in Spain in the south of Europe. Near Spain there are a lot of beautiful places. Our favourite is Italy. I find Italian culture very interesting. Italian food is good, the old cities are very beautiful, the weather is good and the coffee is the best. Italian and Spanish are similar and I know a little Italian, so Language isn’t a problem. When we were in Italy we visited a lot of beauttiful churches, museums and art galleries. There is a lot of history.
Spain is near France. We used to travel in the south of France. French villages and countryside are very beautiful. A lot of medieval castles and churches. My wife speaks French. Although the food is good it is expensive for us. The coffee isn’t so good.
We also have been travelled in Spain.In the north of Spain the food is very good. There are high mountains, the old cities are charming. In the south the Islamic culture is very interesting. Very beautiful mosques.
Portugal is also near to Spain. Portuguese cities are beautiful and cheap.
I also like to travel in Ireland and Scotland. The countryside is beautiful, tranquil. The rural villages and farms are peaceful. Although the weather isn’t good the mountains and forests are green.
欧洲旅行 Travelling in Europe
欧洲旅行
我们的女儿还很小。所以我们现在不出国旅行出国。*不过我们以前喜欢参观欧洲各的国。我们住在西班牙， 在欧洲南边。 西班牙附近有很多美丽的地方。我们最喜欢意大利。我觉得意大利的文化很对我有趣。意大利菜好吃，老旧城市很漂亮，天气很好的，有最好的咖啡最好的。意大利语跟西班牙语很相似同样的。而且我会说一点意大利语。所以语言没问题。在意大利旅行的时候，我们参观很多漂亮的教堂， 有意思的博物馆，美术馆。（那些地方）有很多历史。
在西班牙在法国附近。我们以前去在法国南边旅行。法国的小村子和景色很漂亮。很不少中世纪的城堡和教堂。我的老婆会说法语。虽然法菜好吃但是很贵，还而且咖啡不太好喝的。
我们以前在西班牙旅行。西班牙北方菜很好吃， 有高山，就老城市很有魅力。西班牙南方伊斯兰文化很有意思。清真寺非常漂亮。
在葡萄牙也在西班牙很附近。葡萄牙的城市很漂亮。而且葡萄牙很便宜。 **
我也喜欢在爱尔兰和苏格兰旅行。景色很美丽，宁静。郊外的农场和乡村很宁静。农村子和种地很安静。虽然天气不好，但是山和森林很绿色。
Travelling in Europe.
Now our daughter is small, so we aren’t traveling abroad. However we used to like visiting other European countries. We live in Spain in the south of Europe. Near Spain there are a lot of beautiful places. Our favourite is Italy. I find Italian culture very interesting. Italian food is good, the old cities are very beautiful, the weather is good and the coffee is the best. Italian and Spanish are similar and I know a little Italian, so Language isn’t a problem. When we were in Italy we visited a lot of beauttiful churches, museums and art galleries. There is a lot of history.
Spain is near France. We used to travel in the south of France. French villages and countryside are very beautiful. A lot of medieval castles and churches. My wife speaks French. Although the food is good it is expensive for us. The coffee isn’t so good.
We also have been travelled in Spain.In the north of Spain the food is very good. There are high mountains, the old cities are charming. In the south the Islamic culture is very interesting. Very beautiful mosques.
Portugal is also near to Spain. Portuguese cities are beautiful and cheap.
I also like to travel in Ireland and Scotland. The countryside is beautiful, tranquil. The rural villages and farms are peaceful. Although the weather isn’t good the mountains and forests are green.
* 一般说 “出国旅行”。
** 这里指去葡萄牙旅行的消费很便宜么？
点评： 这篇小作文词汇很丰富。 比如：美丽，旅行，漂亮，教堂，美术馆（一般我说“画廊”），博物馆，城堡，附件，魅力，有意思···进步很大！ 语序错误也少了。看得出来你又用心在学习啊！ 继续加油，再接再厉！
欧洲旅行 Travelling in Europe
欧洲旅行
我们的女儿还很小。所以我们现在不旅行出国（出国旅行）。不过我们以前喜欢参观欧洲的国（国家）。我们住在西班牙， （它）在欧洲南边。 西班牙附近有很多美丽的地方。我们最喜欢意大利。意大利的文化对我有趣 （我对意大利的文化很感兴趣）。意大利菜好吃，旧 （古老的）城市很漂亮，天气好的，咖啡最好的。意大利语跟西班牙语很同样 （类似）的。而且我会说一点意大利语。所以语言没问题。（在）意大利旅行的时候我们参观很多漂亮的教堂， 有意思的博物馆，美术馆。（它们）有很多 （长远）历史。
在西班牙法国附近（西班牙在法国附近）。我们以前在法国南边旅行。法国的小村子 （农村）和景色（乡下)很漂亮。很不少（多）中世纪的城堡和教堂。我的老婆会说法语。虽然法菜 （法菜虽然）好吃但是很贵，还咖啡不太好的。
我们以前在西班牙旅行。西班牙北方菜很好吃， 有高山，就（古老的）城市很（有）魅力。西班牙南方（的）伊斯兰文化很有意思。清真寺非常漂亮。
在西班牙葡萄牙也很附近。（葡萄牙也离西班牙很近）葡萄牙的城市很漂亮（而且旅行很便宜）。而且葡萄牙很便宜。
我也喜欢在爱尔兰和苏格兰旅行。景色很美丽，宁静。农村子和种地 （农场or土地）很安静。虽然天气不好（，但是）山和森林很绿色 （if you want to say that mountains and forests are fill with the colour green,it is better to say 一片绿意or被绿色所笼罩）。
Travelling in Europe.
Now our daughter is small, so we aren’t traveling abroad. However we used to like visiting other European countries. We live in Spain in the south of Europe. Near Spain there are a lot of beautiful places. Our favourite is Italy. I find Italian culture very interesting. Italian food is good, the old cities are very beautiful, the weather is good and the coffee is the best. Italian and Spanish are similar and I know a little Italian, so Language isn’t a problem. When we were in Italy we visited a lot of beauttiful churches, museums and art galleries. There is a lot of history.
Spain is near France. We used to travel in the south of France. French villages and countryside are very beautiful. A lot of medieval castles and churches. My wife speaks French. Although the food is good it is expensive for us. The coffee isn’t so good.
We also have been travelled in Spain.In the north of Spain the food is very good. There are high mountains, the old cities are charming. In the south the Islamic culture is very interesting. Very beautiful mosques.
Portugal is also near to Spain. Portuguese cities are beautiful and cheap.
I also like to travel in Ireland and Scotland. The countryside is beautiful, tranquil. The rural villages and farms are peaceful. Although the weather isn’t good the mountains and forests are green.
欧洲旅行 Travelling in Europe
欧洲旅行
我们的女儿还很小，所以我们现在不出国旅行。不过我们以前喜欢参观欧洲的国家。我们住在西班牙， 在欧洲南边。 西班牙附近有很多美丽的地方。我们最喜欢意大利。意大利的文化对我而言很有趣。意大利菜好吃，旧城市很漂亮，天气好的很好，咖啡是最好的。意大利语跟西班牙语很相似同样的，所以而且我会说一点意大利语，因此所以语言没有问题。意大利旅行的时候我们参观很多漂亮的教堂， 有意思的博物馆、美术馆。意大利拥有悠久的历史。
我们以前曾在法国南边旅行，也就是西班牙与法国附近交界附近。法国的小村子和景色很漂亮，有不少中世纪的城堡和教堂。我的老婆会说法语。法菜虽然好吃但是很贵，而且咖啡不太好的。
我们曾经也在西班牙旅行。西班牙北方菜很好吃， 那里有高山，就旧时的城市充满很魅力。西班牙南方伊斯兰文化很有意思，清真寺非常漂亮。
在西班牙与葡萄牙也很附近葡萄牙与在西班牙西面与西班牙交界，葡萄牙的城市很漂亮。在葡萄牙出行很便宜。
我也喜欢在爱尔兰和苏格兰旅行。那里景色很美丽，很宁静。农村子和田园种地很安静。虽然天气不好，但山和森林绿意盎然，很是美丽。
Travelling in Europe.
Now our daughter is small, so we aren’t traveling abroad. However we used to like visiting other European countries. We live in Spain in the south of Europe. Near Spain there are a lot of beautiful places. Our favourite is Italy. I find Italian culture very interesting. Italian food is good, the old cities are very beautiful, the weather is good and the coffee is the best. Italian and Spanish are similar and I know a little Italian, so Language isn’t a problem. When we were in Italy we visited a lot of beauttiful churches, museums and art galleries. There is a lot of history.
Spain is near France. We used to travel in the south of France. French villages and countryside are very beautiful. A lot of medieval castles and churches. My wife speaks French. Although the food is good it is expensive for us. The coffee isn’t so good.
We also have been travelled in Spain.In the north of Spain the food is very good. There are high mountains, the old cities are charming. In the south the Islamic culture is very interesting. Very beautiful mosques.
Portugal is also near to Spain. Portuguese cities are beautiful and cheap.
I also like to travel in Ireland and Scotland. The countryside is beautiful, tranquil. The rural villages and farms are peaceful. Although the weather isn’t good the mountains and forests are green.
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