Cercedilla. A place amazing for visiting
Dear friend, 
If you choose to come on a weekend getaway to Madrid this summer, I'm going to recommend Cercedilla. It's a awesome place for visiting.
Firstly, early in the morning, you'd better don't lose the incredible village with his old pedestrian streets and huge churchs. 
Secondly, you could stroll for one of his many wonderful paths in the mountain, I'm sure his children will enjoy it.
Next, when sun is warming too much, you should go to the natural pools in the middle of the mountains. I'm sure your family and you will enjoy it a lot. The water is very clear and the sights are very stunning, but it'd better don't forget your swimsuits.
At last but not least, in the sunset, you could visit with your whole family the adventure park, It has amazing platforms up in the trees and no doubt, It will be very fun for your children.

Thanks in advance for your review.

Cercedilla. A place amazing for visiting An amazing place to visit
Dear friend, If you choose to come&nbsp;for a weekend getaway to Madrid this summer, I'm going to recommend Cercedilla. It's a awesome place for visiting. Firstly, early in the morning, you better not miss&nbsp;the incredible village with&nbsp;its old pedestrian streets and huge churches. Secondly, you could stroll for one of his many wonderful paths in the mountain, I'm sure&nbsp;your children will enjoy it. Next, when it becomes very sunny, you should go to the natural pools in the middle of the mountains. I'm sure your family and you will enjoy it a lot. The water is very clear and the sights are very stunning, but it'd better don't forget your swimsuits. And last but not least,&nbsp;at sunset, you could visit with your whole family the adventure park with your whole family, It has amazing platforms up in the trees and no doubt, it will be very fun for your children. Thanks in advance for your review.
en este tipo de escrito, a menudo usamos los imperativos.
at last - s&iacute; es correcto decimos esto, pero aqu&iacute; la frase que buscas es and last but not least
no dir&iacute;a when it becomes too warm porque no quieres que tus huesp&eacute;des se preoccupan de que har&aacute; tanto calor