Miroku
barbecue I had a BBQ!! Chicken only~(  ̄▽ ̄) Tastes r BBQ source, solt and pepper,soy bean paste! These are very delicious!
Apr 19, 2015 11:50 AM
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barbecue

I had a BBQ!!
Only chicken though~(  ̄▽ ̄)

The flavors were BBQ sauce, salt and pepper, and soy bean paste!
They were very delicious!

 

'Only' should correlate with something

     Ex. 'Only', 'though'. 'Only, however'. "Only, then

     "(I) only had chicken, however"

     "Only then did I realize that chicken was delicious" 

Keeping everything in the consistent tense is important ^q^ 

They and were correlate for past tense ^^

April 19, 2015
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barbecue

I had a BBQ !!
Chicken only~(  ̄▽ ̄)

Tastes r The flavours/seasonings were BBQ source sauce, solt salt and pepper, and soy bean paste!
These are were very delicious!

flavour -> Brtish English

flavor -> American English


Sounds like it was a great barbeque :)

April 19, 2015

barbecue

I had a BBQ!!
Chicken only~(  ̄▽ ̄)

Tastes r The flavours were BBQ source soucesolt salt and pepper and soy soya bean paste!
These are were very delicious!

April 19, 2015

Barbecue

I had BBQ!!
It was chicken only~(  ̄▽ ̄)

The seasonings were BBQ sauce, salt, pepper and soy bean paste!
These were very delicious!

April 19, 2015
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