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First note ;; English? English.. English!!!! I have studied in english for decade in my student life. But now... When i'm looking myself i'm still in beginner level. Sometimes i had decided to learning english hard after travel abroad. Because when i travel some place i felt a lot of inconvenient cause i couldn't speaking english fluently. Moreover if some foreigner told me something i was so embarrassed even just simple sentence. It is too hard to do something steady. Especially learning language. But i want to start again for my life. I'm going to study english steady even it's only few minute a day .. I'm very happy to know this website. I'm looking forward how it is helpful to improve my enlish through friends all over the world. Please help me ????
Apr 19, 2015 7:23 PM
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First note ;; English? English.. English!!!!

I have studied English for decade of my student life.
But now... When I look at myself, I'm still at a beginner level. However, even after all those years of studying, when I look at myself, I realize I'm still at a beginner level.

There were times I had decided to study English hard after traveling abroad. Sometimes, after traveling abroad, I regained the motivation to begin studying English hard/diligently.
Because when I traveled to some/certain places, I felt/experienced a lot of inconvenience because/since I couldn't speaking English fluently.
Moreover, if some/a/any foreigner spoke to me, was so embarrassed even if it was just a simple sentence.

It is too hard to do something steadily, especially learning a language. It is very difficult to do something consistently, especially learning (foreign) languages.
But want to start again in order to improve my life.

I'm going to study English consistently, even if it's only for a few minutes a day.

I'm very happy to know about this website. I'm very happy to have found this website.

I'm looking forward to seeing how helpful it is in improving my English through friends from all over the world.

Please help me.

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Excellent!

Don't forget to capitalize "I'.

Review your parts of speech.

ex. "steady" is an adjective so you couldn't use it after a verb to describe it. You would need to use the adverb form "steadily". However, a better word overall is the adverb "consistently".

ex. "inconvenient" is an adjective. "inconvenience" is a noun.

April 20, 2015
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I have corrected this for you. There were lots of grammar, vocab and sentance structure mistakes. I re worded a lot of sentances to make it sound more natural. I hope this is helpfull to you and good luck with your english. I will help you anytime you ask me :)

 

 

First note ;; English? English.. English!!!!

I have studied english for a decade in my student life.
But now... When i look at myself, I'm still at a beginner level.

I had decided that learning english was too hard after traveling abroad, Because when i traveled, It was very inconveinient as I cant speak english fluently.

Even if a foreigner corrected me on just a simple sentance, i was so embrrassed

 

It is too hard to do something slowly. Especially learning a language.
But I want to start again in my life. I'm going to study english steadily, even if it's only for a few minutes a day ..

I'm very happy to have found this website.
I'm looking forward to how it will improve my English, through friends all over the world. Please help me ????

April 19, 2015
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First note ;; English? English.. English!!!!

I have studied in english for decade in my student life.
But now... When I i'm looking at myself , i'm still in at beginner level.

Sometimes i had decided to learning english was too hard after travelling abroad.
Because when i travel some places i felt a lot of inconvenient inconveniency cause  as i couldn't  can't speaking english fluently.
Moreover if some any foreigner told  asks me something i feel so embarrassed even just for a simple sentence.

It is too hard to do something steady.  steadily, especially learning a language.
But i want to start again for in my life. I'm going to study english steady steadily, even it's only for a few minute a day ..

I'm very happy to know find this website.
I'm looking forward how it is helpful to improve my enlish English through friends all over the world. Please help me ????

April 19, 2015

First note: English? English.. English!!!!

I have studied in English for decade in of my student life.
But now... When I looking at myself i'm still in at a beginner level.

Sometimes I had decided to learning study english hard after I traveled abroad.
When I travel some place it's a lot of very inconvenient because I can't speaking english fluently.
Moreover if some foreigner told me something, I was embarrassed even by just a simple sentence.

It is too hard to do something steadily. Especially learning a language.
But I want to start again for my life. I'm going to study english steadily even if it's only few minute a day ..

I'm very happy to know about this website.
I'm looking forward to improving my English through friends all over the world. Please help me ????

 

Well done on your first note! Practicing like this will help you improve your english. I'd be happy to help you if you'd like ^^

April 19, 2015
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