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My first story~*^_^* uh.. im not very good at English. nowadays, I've been dispirited because i feel its more difficult whenever i studied English. and it takes a very long time to make one simple English sentence. i dont even remember very easy words that i know when i speak English. i want to be familiar with and get used to English but it feels like English is fleeing me...haha however, its OK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! with positive attitude, i will try even if it takes a long time. i have to practice and practice!!!!! let's study together~~~^^** Go go go! Good luck! i can do it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i'd appreciate if you correct mistakes. thank you ~~ bye~
Apr 19, 2015 7:32 PM
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a few gramatical and vocab issues

 

My first story~*^_^*

uh.. i'm not very good at English.
Nowadays, I've been dispirited because i feel thats its more difficult when i study English.
and it takes a very long time to make one simple English sentence.
I dont even remember very easy words that I know when I speak English.
I want to be familiar with, and get used to English, but it feels like English is fleeing me...haha
however, it's OK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
With a positive attitude, I will try, even if it takes a long time.
I have to practice and practice!!!!!
let's study together~~~^^** Go go go! Good luck! I can do it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i'd appreciate if you correct mistakes.
thank you ~~ bye~

April 19, 2015

My first story~*^_^*

uh.. im not very good at English.
nowadays, I've been dispirited because i feel its more difficult whenever i study English.
and it takes a very long time to make one simple English sentence.
i dont even remember very easy words that i know when i speak English.
i want to be familiar with and get used to English but it feels like English is fleeing me...haha
however, its OK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
with positive attitude, i will try even if it takes a long time.
i have to practice and practice!!!!!
let's study together~~~^^** Go go go! Good luck! i can do it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i'd appreciate if you correct mistakes.
thank you ~~ bye~

April 19, 2015
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