I am about to graduate. This is the summary of my paper. Pls correct it! Means a lot to me! Thx Abstract For now, the process of economic globalization has accelerated very rapidly. Economic cooperat

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I am about to graduate. This is the summary of my paper. Pls correct it! Means a lot to me! Thx Abstract For now, the process of economic globalization has accelerated very rapidly. Economic cooperation and technological exchanges are deepening worldwide. Economic globalization has brought fierce competition and made extensive impact to the world. Multinational enterprises (MNEs) with strong competitiveness play an important role in the process of economic globalization. There are several international operations types of multinational enterprises, such as: production, investment marketing, and R&D. The R&D internationalization is highest type of economic globalization. It is the result of further deepening of MNEs development. The R&D internationalization of MNEs provides developing countries which have higher skills and technology base an opportunity to enhance their creative capabilities. It can bring China many benefits from different aspects. For instance: knowledge spillovers, industrial competitiveness and optimized allocation of human resource. The purpose of this paper is to found out the positive impacts of MNEs China-based R&D institutions. Give proper policy suggestions through empirical and theoretical analysis. The paper is arranged in five parts. Part 1 discussed the background and significance of the subject. Part 2 introduced major theories of MNEs, included Monopolistic advantage theory, OLI theory. Part 3 &4 are impacts and suggestions. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Thanks in advance!

Apr 21, 2015 9:18 AM

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Abstract

For now, the process of economic globalization has accelerated very rapidly. Economic cooperation and technological exchanges are deepening worldwide. Economic globalization has brought fierce competition and made extensive impact to the world. Multinational enterprises (MNEs) with strong competitiveness play an important role in the process of economic globalization. There are several international operations types (I can barely find this word on the internet, do you mean "foreign operation modes"?) of multinational enterprises, such as: production, investment marketing, and R&D. The R&D internationalization is (the) highest type of economic globalization. It is the result of further deepening of MNEs development.
The R&D internationalization of MNEs provides developing countries which have higher (high is enough, don't need "er") skills and technology base (with) an opportunity to enhance their creative capabilities.
It can bring China many benefits from different aspects. For instance: knowledge spillovers, industrial competitiveness and optimized allocation of human resource.
The purpose of this paper (do you mean "essay" or sth like that :-?) is to found (replace with "find") out the positive impacts of MNEs China-based R&D institutions. Give (the subject is missing, you can combine it with the previous sentence by replacing the dot with the comma "," and changing "give" to "giving") proper policy suggestions through (i would prefer "using") empirical and theoretical analysis.
The paper is arranged in (divided into) five parts. Part 1 discussed (discusses) the background and (the) significance of the subject. Part 2 introduced (introduces) major theories of MNEs, included Monopolistic advantage theory, OLI theory. Part 3 & 4 are impacts and suggestions.
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Quite a good piece of paper :D. But when you got more to the end, it seems like you were likely to make simple mistakes like past/ present tense