Maggie
A exciting experience One year we were taking a road trip in Xingjiang province. One day we chose parking our car. We were riding the horse to a village and consisted of nine horses group. That is the first time we rode a horse, but the horse is tender and obedient, so we could handle it and swing with the horse. We felt very happy. We enjoyed the beautiful gorge landscape, overlooking the bottom of the river and saw many kinds of flowers. We consciously ran into a storm which was too stong and too sunddenly. The storm was continue one hour. That was totally a disaster, consequently we were wet all over with all the clothes, shoes and backpacks. We felt so frustrated till we saw a vivid rainbow across over the two peaks. That’s a fascinating scenery, we were cheered up and speeded our horse. When we rode into the plain you could feel that the horse began to run like the wind. I felt excited as well as frightened. That’s so thrilling! Finally we arrived at the little village. We totally spent six hours on the horse. So the next day I felt body rigid and pain, especially ass and thighs. But we all agreed that it was a so exciting experience!
Apr 21, 2015 11:55 AM
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A An eExciting eExperience

One year we were taking took a road trip in Xingjiang province. One day we chose parking To park our car. We were riding the horses to a village and our group consisted of nine horses group. That is was the first time we rode a horse had ever ridden horses, but the horses is were tender and obedient, so we could handle it them and swing with the horses. We felt very happy. We enjoyed the beautiful gorge landscape, overlooking the bottom of the river and saw many kinds of flowers.

We consciously ran into a storm which was too stong and came up too sunddenly. The storm was continued for one hour. That was a totally a disaster. cConsequently, we were wet all over, with all the including our clothes, shoes and backpacks. We felt so frustrated till until we saw a vivid rainbow across the gorge, stretching over the two peaks. That’s a was fascinating scenery, we were cheered up by the view and speeded sped our horses up. When we rode into the plain you could feel that the horses began to run like the wind. I felt excited as well as frightened. That’s was so thrilling! Finally we arrived at the little village.

We totally spent six hours, total, on the horses. So, the next day I felt my body felt rigid and in a lot of pain, especially my ass (<em>butt, tush, </em><em>back side</em>, or<em> rear end </em>are more appropriate, especially if this is for TOEFL, IELTS or another test or essay) and thighs. But we all agreed that it was a so such an exciting experience!

April 21, 2015
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