Please correct these sentences 1. A cat was scared by dogs, then it was scrambling up on a wall's carpet. 2. I was snaked through the crowd in a department during a sale trying to find something chea

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Please correct these sentences 1. A cat was scared by dogs, then it was scrambling up on a wall's carpet. 2. I was snaked through the crowd in a department during a sale trying to find something cheap. 3. It's one of my pet peeves: when I squeeze through the crowd on the bus in hot summer. 4. A tiger protects their youngs from jackals. 5. Our organization preserves tigers from poachers. 6. We must preserve our environment from pollutions. 7. Doctors recover from wounds, but they can't heal us from our soul pain. 8. A good doctor can't repair any injuries, because he is an expert of definite area. 8. John repaired my computer, although I couldn't fix it.

Apr 21, 2015 12:58 PM

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Please correct these sentences

1. A cat was scared by dogs, so it scrambled up a wall. I don't understand what you mean by "a wall's carpet".
2. I was snaked through the crowd in a department store during a sale, trying to find something cheap.
3. One of my pet peeves is when I have to squeeze through the crowd on the bus in the heat of summer.
4. A tiger protects its young from jackals. "young" is a collective noun. Even if the tiger has many cubs, we still use the singular form.
5. Our organization protects tigers from poachers.
6. We must preserve our environment from pollution. "pollution" is almost always used as an uncountable noun, and is used in the singular.
7. Doctors heal our wounds, but they can't heal the pain in our soul.
8. A good doctor can't heal every injury, because he is an expert in a defined area.
8. John repaired my computer, because I couldn't fix it.