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Today Everything was as usual today. I got up at 7 am, went to bathroom to prepare myself for school. All my preparation takes 30 minutes. I eat, dress school suit, make my hair and after I have 30 minutes for route to school. It was not anything interesting at school, boring as always. I've wasted 8 hours being there. After I've returned home. First of all, I've had a good lunch consisted of macaronis, cheese and some vegetables. Having eaten that perfect meal, I went to my room to do my homework. There were not much work today so I decided to learn English doing some exercise on PuzzleEnglish.com (web-site for English learners). There was an exercise that sent to me the nostalgia. It was scene from film - my favorite film and book "Jane Eyre" by Charlotte Bronte. I've read this book first when I was 5, I had perceived that book as child and decided to read it again at 14.I've realized that novel completely. I've watched many screening of that delightful book and liked everything. Each film adduce this story from different sides and, perhaps, it does not become worse. The image of Jane Eyre is always different, although her strong characters are still the same, some minor character traits have been changing in different films. In some ones she is gentler, kinder; in others she is cold, shy and so on. I imagined her uglier than in film, like me, for example. To cut a long story short, I wished to watch this film again to refresh my feelings nevertheless it is my favorite love story. During watching the film my mother came back home and called me. And it was the beginning of another story for this day. She handed me her bag where was something stirring. I opened the bag and sighted two puppies. They were quite big for newborns. They have recently opened their eyes but still they could not eat by themselves. Therefore we had to feed them with pipette. They turned out to stay without their mother.My mum found them in place where she works. Their dog mother had bad habit to rush for driving cars and one day she was disappeared. My mum works in a coffee and people usually leave animals there.Once she saved a dog hit with the car. When people pass by my mum always stops and helps. It is easy to be kind when you have never seen people's cruelty but she see it every day but yet she saves her kindness. Sometimes people consider themselves to be kind even not to know what evil means. Today my mum has proved again that she is not from their count.
Apr 21, 2015 9:20 PM
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Today

Everything was as usual today.  I got up at 7am and went to bathroom to prepare myself for school.  All my preparations take 30 minutes: I eat, put on my school suit (or you can use the word "uniform" instead of "suit"), and brush my hair.  Afterwards it takes 30 minutes to get to school. There was nothing interesting at school, boring as always.  I wasted 8 hours being there.  After school, I returned home.  First of all, I had a good lunch consisting of macaroni, cheese and some vegetables.  Having eaten the perfect meal, I went to my room to do my homework.  There was not much work today so I decided to learn English doing some exercises on PuzzleEnglish.com (website for English learners).  There was an exercise that gave me nostalgia.  It was a scene from my favorite film and book "Jane Eyre" by Charlotte Bronte.  I read this book first when I was 5, I perceived(?) the book as a child and decided to read it again at 14.  I realized(?) the novel completely.  I've watched many screenings of that delightful book and liked everything.  Each film adduce this story from different sides and, perhaps, it does not become worse.  The image of Jane Eyre is always different, although her strong character is still the same, some minor character traits have been changed in different films.  In some she is gentler, kinder; in others she is cold, shy and so on.  I imagined her uglier than in the film, like me, for example.  To cut a long story short, I wish to watch this film again to refresh my feelings nevertheless.  It is my favorite love story.  While watching the film, my mother came back home and called me and it was the beginning of another story for this day.  She handed me her bag in which something was stirring.  I opened the bag and saw two puppies.  They were quite big for newborns.  They have recently opened their eyes but still they could not eat by themselves therefore we had to feed them with a pipette.  They turned out to stay without their mother.  My mum found them in a place where she works.  The dogs' mother had a bad habit of rushing after driving cars and one day she disappeared.  My mum works in a coffee shop and people usually leave animals there.  Once she saved a dog that was hit by a car.  When people pass by my mum always stops and helps.  It is easy to be kind when you have never seen people's cruelty but she see it every day and yet she saves her kindness.  Sometimes people consider themselves to be kind even not knowing what evil means.  Today my mum has proved again that she is not from their count.

April 22, 2015
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Dear friends, if my massage it too long, go through it by parts, if it's possible. It is very important to me to analize my mistakes. Thank you!

April 21, 2015
Thanks for sharing! Your mom sounds like a kind woman!
April 22, 2015
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