My homework Hello to everyone, I do my homework and i appreciate if someone can correct my mistakes. I have to write a letter to my friend and tell him i'm going to change my lifestyle habits (fictio

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My homework Hello to everyone, I do my homework and i appreciate if someone can correct my mistakes. I have to write a letter to my friend and tell him i'm going to change my lifestyle habits (fiction). So here we go Hello Chris First of all, I have to thank you about your recent letter, I'm very happy to know you are doing well. I need to tell you something. As you know, my health is getting worse and I have been feeling bad more often than before because I'm a very lazy person. I've been planning to change my lifestyle. I'm beginning to change my sleeping time from 1 AM to 11 PM because I usually stay late at night in the computer doing nothing and the next day I feel so tired. Also, I'm going to stop eating fast food because that's the more important thing I need to change. I want to eat a healthy balanced diet with less fat, more proteins and vegetables. It's going to be hard but I must do it. Oh, Another thing, Do you remember the time when you said you're going to play Football? I'm going to practice it too, so maybe someday we can play together!. Well, it's time to go! I will write again soon to share with you my new healthier lifestyle. Take care of yourself.

Apr 22, 2015 12:44 AM

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My homework

Hello to everyone, I do my homework and i appreciate if someone can correct my mistakes.
I have to write a letter to my friend and tell him i'm going to change my lifestyle habits (fiction). jaja
So here we go

Hello Chris
First of all, I have to thank you about your recent letter, I'm very happy to know you are doing well.

I need to tell you something. As you know, my health is getting worse and I have been feeling bad more often than before because I'm a very lazy person.
I've been planning to change my lifestyle. I'm beginning to change my sleeping time from 1 AM to 11 PM because I usually stay up late at night on the computer doing nothing and the next day I feel so tired.

Also, I'm going to stop eating fast food--- that's the more important thing I need to change. I want to eat a healthy balanced diet with less fat, more proteins and vegetables. It's going to be hard but I must do it.

Oh, another thing, Do you remember the time when you said you're going to play Football? I'm going to practice it too, so maybe someday we can play together!

Well, it's time to go! I will write again soon to share with you my new healthier lifestyle. Take care of yourself.

April 22, 2015

Hello Chris,

First of all, I have to thank you <s>about</s> for your recent letter. I'm very happy to know you are doing well.

I need to tell you something. As you know, my health is getting worse, and I have been feeling bad more often <s>than before</s> [you can say "lately" if you want] because I'm a very lazy person. I've been planning to change my lifestyle. I'm <s>beginning </s>starting to change my <s>sleeping time</s> bedtime from 1 AM to 11 PM, because I usually stay up late at night <s>in </s>on the computer doing nothing, and I feel so tired the next day.

Also, I'm going to stop eating fast food, because that's [what is? Maybe say, "my diet is"] the <s>more </s>most important thing I need to change. I want to eat a healthy, balanced diet with less fat, more proteins and vegetables. It's going to be hard, but I must do it.

Oh, another thing, do you remember the time when you said you're going to play football? I'm going to practice it too, so maybe someday we can play together!

Well, it's time to go! I will write again soon to share with you my new healthier lifestyle. Take care of yourself.<o:p></o:p>