diary. please tell me if you find mistakes.
Hi! this is Ina/
I had a good weekend.
I started italki last week,I got made many new friends all over the world !
We have talked on italki,and on Skype.
And we have become close.
i'm very very fun and happy!
I ask they them many questions.
For example,"I heard Canadians usually poor pour maple syrup on pizza, is it true? "
the question's answer is "NO"
Actually, It feel felt like a bit of a bummer XD
But very fun. Everyone are is kindness for to me.
(I'm happy you made friends! And unfortunately, we do not pour maple syrup on pizza :p But maybe you could try it yourself if you ever come to Canada~ Great English! Keep up the good work)
diary. please tell me if you find any mistakes.
Hi! this is Ina/
I had a good weekend.
I started italki last week, I've got (I + have. I got = grammatically not correct, but many US people uses in informal speech) many new friends from (they are <em>from</em> somewhere) all over the world !
We talked (talk + <em>past</em> <em>tense</em> = talked. You can use <em>chatted</em> too = chat + <em>past tense</em>.) on italki(,) and on Skype.
And we've become (we + have)/we became close.
i'm very very fun and happy! I had so much fun (you <em>have </em>fun when you <em>enjoy</em> something) and I am very very happy!
I ask (ask + <em>past tense </em>= asked) they them many questions (question + <em>plural </em>= questions; you asked them <em>lots of</em> <em>questions</em>! Not just <em>one</em> <em>question</em>.).
For example,"I heard Canadian usually pour (poor = 貧しい, pour = 注ぐ) maple syrup on pizza, is it true? "
the question's (answer is already from a question) answer is "NO". Actually(,) I feel a bit of a bummer XD
But it was very fun. Everyone are kind (kindness is not adjective, is substantive.) to me.
"Hi! this is Ina/
I had a good weekend.
I started italki last week,I got many new friends all over the world !
We have talk on italki,and on Skype.
And we become close.
i'm very very fun.and happy!
I ask they many question.
For example,"I heard Canadian usually poor maple syrup on pizza, is it true? "
the question's answer is "NO"
Actually,I feel A bit of a bummer XD
But very fun. Everyone are kindness for me."
Here's how you can correct this:
Hi, my name is Ina and I had a good weekend. [You can take out the exclimation point (!) to make the sentence smaller you can also but the first two sentences together to make it into one]
I started iTalki last week and made many new friends from all over the world. [English uses words like "and" "but" "so" "if" "then" to put two or more sentences together]
We talk on italki and on skype. We became close.
I'm very fun and happy. [You only need one "very"]
I asked them many questions. For example, "I heard Canadians usually pour ["poor" means "the person has very little" like "That person is poor". "pour" means to "put something on" like "That man pours tea in the cup"] maple syrup on pizza, is that true?" ["ask" is present tense meaning "now". "Let me ask him a question". "asked" is past tense meaning "earlier". "I asked if he wanted to go" and "asking" is future tense meaning "later". "I plan on asking him later.]
They said "No" [Is smaller and easier to read] and I felt a bit bummed [meaning you talked to them earlier] but it was fun and everyone was kind to me. [when writting a sentence, you want to make sure the whole sentence is in past, present or future tense. Mixing them up confuses the reader]
I hoped this helped you. If you have any questions please ask.
