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The Island-writing task_1_9 The two maps indicate illustration for an island before & after some changes that happened to help tourists in their vacation. We can notice that before the changes there was only Palm trees on the island as there were not any services that can help tourists to enjoy their holiday. After the construction, two groups of accommodation are built on the two sides of the island, In addition to renovate new footpath to pedestrians between the palm trees to connect the houses with reception building which is built in the middle of the island. Leaving space for swimming on the right of the beach, building a restaurant on the north, designing a pier in the south made excited environment to make enjoyable space fulfill with essential factors for human being.
Apr 22, 2015 1:27 AM
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The Island-writing task_1_9

The two maps shown below are illustrations of an island before and after some changes that happened to help tourists in their vacations.
We can notice that before the changes there were only palm trees on the island as there were not any services that could help tourists to enjoy their holiday.
After the construction, two groups of accommodation were built on the two sides of the island, In addition to renovate new footpaths were built for pedestrians between the palm trees to connect the houses with the reception building which is built in the middle of the island.
Space has been left for swimming on the right of the beach, and a restaurant has been built in the north. Placing a pier in the south created an exciting environment to make enjoyable space to provide fulfill with essential factors for the enjoyment of vacationers.

 

<em>[Good work.  Prepositions are difficult and many of the phrases are complex.  Your basic understanding is good.]</em>

April 22, 2015
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