Christine
i need to return the items that i brought online but I'm so bad at writing .... hi, I just received my ordered items yesterday and 3 of them have some problem, those 3 are Rubber Band LED Car Watch/Table with Blue Light Display Time Arch Shaped (Black) (<-- which the bottom key is blocked), Letter Print Fashionable Jewel Neck Long Sleeve Women's Sweatshirt (L) (<-- which is way too small and poor quality) , Elegant Solid Color Floral and Leaf Shape Alloy Hairband For Women (<-- which one of the flower is fall apart with the hairband) besides that, I also found out Bohemian Women's V-Neck Embroidered Pleated Chiffon Dress came without the belt and I had read the reviews about the dress and the reviewed consumers wrote came with the belt. So I pretty upset without the belt. I strongly required returning them and get the new items.
Apr 22, 2015 2:56 AM
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i need to return the items that i brought online but I'm so bad at writing ....

hi, I just received my ordered items yesterday and 3 of them have some problemsthose 3 are First,  the Rubber Band LED Car Watch/Table with Blue Light Display Time Arch Shaped (Black) (<-- which the bottom key is blocked). Second, the Letter Print Fashionable Jewel Neck Long Sleeve Women's Sweatshirt (L) (<-- which is way too small and poor quality). Last, the Elegant Solid Color Floral and Leaf Shape Alloy Hairband For Women (<-- which one of the flower is fall apart with the hairband)
besides that, I also found out Bohemian Women's V-Neck Embroidered Pleated Chiffon Dress came without the belt and . I had read the reviews about the dress and the reviewed consumers wrote came with the belt. So I pretty upset without about the belt.
I strongly required wish to returning them these items and get the new items ones. ( Alternatively you can say and get replacements instead of new ones)


Your writing is very good! I could understand everything you were trying to say. Keep practicing and you will be able to write in a more formal manner. I would suggest breaking up your long sentence. This allows your statements to be more clear for the reader rather than having a long run-on! (This is just a suggestion)

April 22, 2015
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