Karen E.
I have an idea !! I read a book called Confess and I liked it a lot. This book inspired Me because the main character was a painter and He was inspired by a few notes that the people left Him and those notes was secrets of them. He gave Them a place to put all the good and bad secrets and with the notes He created a beautiful paintings. So I think We need something like that in every single country to see how something sad becomes to something beautiful.
Apr 22, 2015 3:00 AM
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I have an idea !!

I read a book called Confess and I like it a lot. This book inspired me because the main character was a painter who was inspired by a few notes containing secrets of the people who left them for him. He gave them a place to put all the good and bad secrets and with the notes he created beautiful paintings. So I think we need something like that in every single country to see how something sad can become something beautiful.

April 22, 2015
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I have an idea !!

I read a book called Confess and I liked it a lot. This book inspired me I was inspired by this book because the main character was a painter and He was who was inspired by a few notes that the people left Him and those notes was secrets of them ,which contain secrets of the people and left them for him.He gave them a provided a place to put all the good and bad secrets.with the notes he created a beautiful paintings and created beautiful paintings by using the notes that they gave him. So I think we need something like that in every single country to see how something sad becomes can turn into something beautiful.

 

* Just another way to write this sentence*. The first one was right, however, in english there are lots of ways on how you write or express your ideas in a sentence =)

June 17, 2015
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November 30, 2015
Italki doesn't let me send you a message but: I am fluent in English. I would love to help you with your english if you will help me with spanish. ;). I would say I'm in the intermediate range with spanish.
November 13, 2015
I'd like to be language partners
June 25, 2015
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