alexander
my family I am very glad because my family is super good whith me! when I need a favor or advice they always are with me! in my life I had many experiences very strong like my grandfather died! my mom oh my god! my mos is super I love her a lot. my father is 43 year old my mom too. they love me a lot I know! they always tell me! we know I know you can do it!
Apr 24, 2015 11:45 PM
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My Family

I am very glad because my family is super good whith to (or with) me! When I need a favor or advice they always are with help me! In my life I had many emotional experiencesvery strong like my grandfather died the death of my grandfather. My mom--oh my God! My mom is super amazing/great/etc. I love her a lot. My father is 43 years old, and so is my mom too. I know they love me a lot I know! They always tell me, "We know I know you can do it!"

 

Edited: I am very glad because my family is super good to/with me! When I need a favor or advice they always help me! In my life I had many emotional experiences, like the death of my grandfather. My mom--oh my God! My mom is amazing/great. I love her a lot. My father is 43 years old, and so is my mom. I know they love me a lot! They always tell me, "We know you can do it!"

 

Comments: Great job! Your English is really good! I'm glad you have such a supportive family. 

April 25, 2015
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