Don't give up!!!

Hello. I'm here for to learning English and hope I can meet somebody who wants to learning Vietnamese language and so  I can improve my English.

Maybe the sentence is a little long, Aaron divided it in two parts, that is a good idea.

Wish you the best of luck with your English ! Good job ! :-)

don't give up!!!

Hello. I'm here for learning/to learn English and hope I can meet somebody wanting to learning Vietnamese language and I so that we can improve together my English

Don't give up!!!

Hello. I'm here to learn English, and I hope I can meet somebody who wants to learn Vietnamese language. I want to improve my English.

Well done! :)