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исправьте пожалуйста) may be so much errors.. hello, my name is Marat. I'm 20 years and I'm from Moscow. I am student, I like play basketball, watch football, read books and listen music. I want learning talk on english language, I hope, who help me? I very good know russian language. Wait yours answers..
Apr 25, 2015 7:32 AM
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исправьте пожалуйста) maybe so much too many errors..

Hello, my name is Marat. I'm 20 years old and I'm from Moscow, where I am a student who likes playing basketball, watching football, reading books and listening to music. I want to learning talk on English language, I hope, who help me? I know how to speak very good know Russian language. Waiting for  your replies/responses/answers..

April 25, 2015
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исправьте пожалуйста) may be so many errors..

hello, my name is Marat. I'm 20 years and I'm from Moscow. I am student, I like playing basketball, watching football (games), reading books and listening to music. I want to learning to talk on/speak english language, I hope, who help me? I very good know russian language very well. Wait yours answers..

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nice job you've done and here's some errors:

1. I am student

I didn't learn Russian before, if I don't recall wrong, the Russian translation of this sentence should be like, "ya student"?, however, in English when you want to say you are "job name", you need to add an article: a or an, e.g. I am a teacher, I am an engineer

2. like + to + verb / like + verb-ing

3. listen to music, the "to" here shouldn't be left out

4. want + to + verb> eg. I want to visit Turkey

5. Usually, when you want to express you can say one language, you use "speak" instead of "talk"

April 25, 2015
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исправьте пожалуйста) may be so much errors..

Hello, my name is Marat. I'm 20 years old and I'm from Moscow. I am (a) student. I like playing basketball, watching football, reading books and listening to music. I want to learn English well. I want to know-who can help me? I am good at (the language of )Russian! I am looking forward to seeing yoursyour answers...

April 25, 2015
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April 25, 2015

исправьте пожалуйста) may be so much errors..

Hello, my name is Marat. I'm 20 years old and I'm from Moscow. I am a student, I like to play basketball, watch football, read books and listen to music. I want to speak English fluently so I hope you can help me. In my turn, I'm very good at Russian/ I'm a native Russian speaker. Looking forward to your answer.

April 25, 2015
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