Shine Lee
Presure(comment or revise) im a chinese colloge studengt,im feel stong presure,since 700 millions chinese colloge students graduate in China per year. im grow up in countryside in the enviroment that majority just want money and boast of rich,so i become to be meterialist and lose.i may can live myself life,but im not along,i have lover ,farmily,friends.So i have to compete .i think that possession of english may hoisting my competitive capacity.
Apr 25, 2015 10:33 AM
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Pressure(comment or revise)

I'm a Chinese colloge student and I feel strong pressure, since 700 millions(or 7 million?) Chinese college students graduate in China per year.
I grew up in the countryside in the enviroment that majority just want money and boast the rich, so I became materialistic and lose (lose what?). I may be able to live my own life, but I'm not going along with my lover, family, and friends. So I have to compete. i think that possession of English skills may improve my competitive capacity.

 

Nicely wirtten. Good job!

April 25, 2015
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