Kamila
My new shirt -> need some help I want to have a funny and original t-shirt, I have an idea but please check if I did it right. I put some explanations in brackets [ ]: "Things to do: [maybe list to do?] * travel around the world * star in a Hollywood movie * don't be a salad, be the best goddamn broccoli I could ever be [this is kind of quote] * find out what "too sweet" means * visit Japan & buy as much cute shi*t as I'll find [...as I can find?] * meet SHINee [it's the name of the band] * smile everyday!" What do you think? Please if it's correct let me know and if there are mistakes correct them... I'm counting on you!
Apr 25, 2015 2:42 PM
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My new shirt -> need some help

I want to have a funny and original t-shirt, I have an idea but please check if I did it right. I put some explanations in brackets [ ]:

"To Do: [We just say To Do:, we even call that a 'to do' list?]
* travel around the world
* star in a Hollywood movie
* don't be a salad, be the best goddamn broccoli I could ever be [this is kind of quote]
* find out what "too sweet" means
* visit Japan & buy as much cute shi*t as I can [...as I can find?]
* meet SHINee [it's the name of the band]
* smile everyday!"

What do you think? Please if it's correct let me know and if there are mistakes correct them... I'm counting on you!

 

There's a few small things, but I like it!

April 25, 2015
as I can find The rest is good
April 25, 2015
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