Who to decide

Who to decide 
We must mtake every decision seriously. Whatever for you or the others. How to decide you do you decide to do everything?Contain two important roles, on one side is conscious, on the other side is unconscious. A conscious is that when your brain is clearly and assigns your body to do everything. An unconscious is that when your brain have a is on a vacation and you do everything by your feeling. 
Sometimes we do everything by consciously, especially the important thinghs in our lives. Such as finding a good job, finding a lover, passing the an examination. We always seriously have to decide how to better do achieve our goals. it. So before we make a decistion decision, we must try our best to do it, attempt it first, then we will have a best make a better decistion decision after. For my example, when I was a high school student, I tryied my best to study in order to goet a high score. Finally, I made a the best decision to choice choose the a best university. So, a good conscious decision is belongs to comes from your effort. 
Sometimes we do somethings by unconsciously, especially not important thinghs things that are not important. Such as shopping, seeing a film, going out eating to eat. But in my opinion, sometimes being unconscious is better than being conscious. For my example, when I was dancing  dance, I like doing some moves by my feeling. My moves were not controlled by my brain. When I have a choreography a dance, I sometimes do it by my feeling how I feel. finally the dacing effect a better effects. I think dance comes from nature, originality, and feeling. do not control your moves by your brain Do not let your brain control your dance moves. Maybe the nature moves moving with nature can touching everyone, because this kind of dance is nature dance is something created naturally from feeling. 
So your conscious and unconscious are all both important and different. They belong to different thinghs, so you can choose which one is better for you. But whatever you do, everything try your best trying to do your best at everything is the most important thing. 


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Tried helping out best i can ^^ It was a little confusing at first, but after reading it a bit I understood what it was exactly you were talking about. 

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