Xiaorong Xie
Unhealty habbits With the end of task of senior high school, we students went to the college, but at the same time, we have exposed to many problems. Staying up late is the most serious problem on campus. The college students increasingly used mobile phone in order to talk to others or to play games. Furthermore, rich or otherwise, some of them just waste money in amativeness and food. Laziness, playing truant, being indifferent to others such as these things are felt to be given more weight. The habbits said above are not supposed to ignore once and once. Otherwise, we will be unable men after graduation. It's never too late to correct them. Given that we have more freedom now, We should be not half taking notice of details step by step, we can enhance ourselves.
Apr 26, 2015 10:43 AM
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Unhealty Habits

With the end of senior high school, we students went to college, but at the same time, we have been exposed to many problems.
Staying up late is the most serious problem on campus. The college students increasingly use mobile phones in order to talk to others or play games. Furthermore, rich or otherwise(poor?), some of them just waste money in amativeness(?) and food. Laziness, truancy, and being indifferent to others are felt to be given more weight.
The habits said above are not supposed to be ignored. Otherwise, we will be unable to become men after graduation. It's never too late to correct them. Given that we have more freedom now,
we should not be half taking notice of these details step by step and enhance ourselves.

 

Pretty well written. I made a few corrections.

Yeah, I think staying up late is becoming a larger and larger problem among our generation (especially college students).

April 26, 2015
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