Writing a Short Story...

I gotta write a short story for hw...
Pls help me fix!!

It's a baking hot day. I cannot see people on the street, and it's too hot to walk outside. It's crazy. Recently, I'm not in mood to move from my room, I don't know the reason though. Aww...I feel like my brain is melting out from my ear. Tease days temperatures are so high, they never go down. I hope I have friends to go swimming or eat ice together with, it might change this feeling that makes me tired and bored, but my family just moved here two weeks ago and my new school is in the summer break, so I haven't met my new schoolmates yet.
"Aaaashley!! Come down here. It's already one thirty. Let's have lunch together." Mom yelled from downstairs. This is one thing that I don't like about her. Her voice is hurting my head.
"Ashley~! Aaaaashhhhley!!!"
".....Okay! Okay!! I will go down soon!"
Nagonia(Nagoya?) is a nice and conformable town and there are a lot of plants and which makes this town look beautiful. However, it can't make me feel better. Even though my birthday is coming in two days, I have a feeling it is going to be an awful one.
Knock! Knock!
Something knocked the window near my bed so I looked at it. There was a white cat sitting by the window. It has silver left eye and gold right eye, It was staring at me for while and scratched on my window.
"Hey!? wait thats mean Cat!!"
Usually popular looking good people don't care about ugly people and it's also fit to cat. I figure out about it and it made me felt more miserable. I finally decided to go downstairs to eat lunch to forget this creepy cat. So woke up really slowly on bed. This is the story of the boring girl.

Nicely written! I hope you will feel better and have great birthday :D

It's baking hot today. I can't see people on the street, it's too hot outside to walk, it's crazy. Recently, I haven't been in the mood to move from my room, I don't know the reason why though. Ugh, I feel my brain melting out of my ear from the heat. The temperature is so high, it never goes down. I wish I had friends, so I could go swimming or even eat ice with me, it might make the bored and tired feeling go away.

My family moved here two weeks ago, and since school is in summer break, I haven't met any of my future classmates. "Ashley! Come down here, it's already one thirty in the afternoon! Come eat lunch with me!" I hear my mum call from downstairs, that's another thing I don't like her, her voice hurts my head.

"Ashley! Ashley!" She calls again, "Okay, Okay" I yelled "I'll come down soon." Nagoya is a nice town and it's filled with plants that make it look beautiful, however the beautiful sites don't make me feel any better. Not the fact that my birthday is in two days makes me feel better, mostly because I have a feeling it's going to be an awful one.

I heard a knock on the window above my bed, and I look over to see a white cat sitting by the window. The cat had such cool eyes, the one of the left being silver and the right one being gold. The cat stared at me for awhile before scratching at the window, "Well that's mean" I said pouting. No need to be like one of the good looking kids who don't care for he ugly ones, I thought. I decided to head downstairs and eat lunch rather than think about that creepy cat any longer.

Writing a short story...
I gotta write a short story for hw...
Pls help me fix it!!

It's a baking hot day. I cannot see people on the street, it's too hot to walk outside, It’s crazy. Recently, I've not been in mood to move from my room, I don't know the reason why. Aww...I feel like my brain is melting out from my ears. These days the temperature is so high and never goes down. I wish I had friends to go swimming or eat ice cream with, It might change this feeling that makes me so tired and bored but my family just moved here two weeks ago and my new school is in summer brake so I haven't met my new school mates yet.
"Aaaashley!! Come down here. It's already one thirty. Let's have lunch together." Mom yelled from down stairs. This is one thing that I don't like to hear. Her voice is scratching my brain.
"Ashley~! Aaaaashhhhley!!!"
".....Okay! Okay!! I will be down soon!"
Nagonia is a nice and comfortable town and there are a lot of plants that make this town look beautiful. However it can't make me feel better. Even my birthday is coming in two days but my feelings tells me it’s going to be an awful one.
“Knock! Knock!”
Something knocks at the window near my bed so I look over. There is a white cat sitting by the window. It has a silver left eye and gold right eye, (its left eye is silver and its right eye is gold) It stares at me for a while and scratches at window.
"Hey!? Wait that’s mean, Cat!!"
Usually popular good looking people don't care about ugly people and it's also true for this cat. I figure this out and it makes me feel more miserable. I finally decide to go down stairs to eat lunch in order to forget this creepy cat. I wake up really slowly in bed. This is the story of the boring girl.