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a trip In my company.Everyyear we have a chance to go for a trip.The cost is our company pay for.Today totally 9persson were guided.We driven to a hill nearest and there's a lake.It's surroned by hills.we took some food for barbecue.Also we took some vegetables and fruits.I can't send pictures to this articles.We al excited.Tommorow is mondy.But i have a rest day.I am not ready get up later.I plan to help my father with his reasturant.Okay.Today is over. Have a good night.See you next day
Apr 26, 2015 3:18 PM
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A Trip

In my company, every year we have a chance to go on a trip. The cost is paid for by our company. Today a total of 9 people were guided. We drove to the nearest hill and there's a lake. It's surrounded by hills. We took some food for the barbecue and we also took some vegetables and fruits. I can't send pictures to this article. We were all excited. Tommorow is Monday. But I have a rest day. I am not ready get up later, so I plan to help my father with his reasturant. Okay. Today is over. Have a good night. See you tomorrow.



Nice job! I made a few corrections.

That sounds like a good benefit to have at your company. 

April 26, 2015
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