Self Introduction

Hello, though I have been posting my writing 3 years ago, I have stopped posting due to some reasons. Now I want to start again to polish my English, so I have written about myself because there are many occasions on which I have to speak about myself.

I am bandobast. I was born in India and raised in Japan. Both my parents are Japanese. My father was working as a diplomat and my mother was working as a nurse in India when I was born.

Speaking of About my father, he studied in a B.A in Hindi in Japan and a M.A in Hindi in India. He speaks Hindi fluently and was learning Sanskrit, Bengali and Punjabi. He was like more of a scholar than a diplomat. He passed away in 1998. About my mother, she worked in an institute for leprosy behind Taj Mahal and she was a nurse as a member of for the medical team, sent by the Japanese government. She is still a nurse, working in a day care center in Japan. She speaks a little bit of Hindi since she needs it for to communicate to patients when she was working in India.

After completing my father's tenure, our family returned to Japan. That was a one year after my birth.

I studied in Hindi a diploma in Hindi course in Japan, After my graduation, from senior school and I came to India, when I was 21.

However I was not interested in Hindi nor India till 19. I was more interested in Archaeology. but I faced deadlock in my life. (I don't understand this part)

I failed in college entrance exam continuously for two years.This incident made me to think about my nature and my way of living very deeply. During that time my father brought me a brochure of a language school of Hindi, Chinese, Arabian and Indonesian. I thought that there must be a meaning why I failed the exam and met Hindi. I chose Hindi and studied for 2 years. After graduation, I have studied a B.A in Hindi and B.Com. Now I live in India and got have Indian citizenship too. I got married with a Japanese who was my classmate of the language school in Japan and have two daughters. My wife has done a Ph.D in Hindi and now works as a freelancer in Japanese to Hindi translation. This is a brief introduction about me.

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Self-introduction

Hello. Although I was posting my writing 3 years ago, I have stopped posting due to some reasons. Now I want to start again to polish my English, so I have written about myself because there are many occasions on which I have to speak about myself.

I am bandobast. I was born in India and raised in Japan. Both my parents are Japanese. My father was working as a diplomat and my mother was working as a nurse in India when I was born.

Speaking of my father, he had a B.A in Hindi in Japan and a M.A in Hindi in India. He spoke Hindi fluently and was learning Sanskrit, Bengali, Punjabi. He was more like a scholar than diplomat. He passed away in 1998. About my mother, she worked in an institute for leprosy behind Taj Mahal and she was nurse as a member of medical team sent by the Japanese government. She is still a nurse working in a day care center in Japan. She speaks a little bit of Hindi since she needed it to communicate to patients when she was working in India.

After completing my father's tenure, our family returned to Japan. That was a year after my birth.

I studied in a Hindi diploma course in Japan after my graduation from senior school and I came to India when I was 21.

However I was not interested in Hindi nor India till 19. I was more interested in Archaeology,but I faced a deadlock in my life. I failed in college entrance exams continuously for two years.This incident made me think about my nature and my way of living very deeply. During that time my father brought me a brochure of language schools of Hindi, Chinese, Arabian and Indonesian. I thought that there must be meaning to why I failed the entrance exams and met Hindi. I chose Hindi and studied for 2 years. After graduation, I studied a B.A in Hindi and B.Com. Now I live in India and have Indian citizenship too. I got married with a Japanese who was my classmate in language school in Japan and have two daughters. My wife has done a Ph.D in Hindi and now work as freelancer in Japanese-Hindi translation. This is brief introduction about me.

This is a very well written introduction. Nice job and your life story is pretty interesting. Keep it up!