Email to my friend.
Hi Peter
Sorry for not writing earlier, but I have been very busy since I got back from the UK.
Thank you for your last email with all the photos of us, thanks also for those wonderful 3 months, I was very happy with my trip to the UK last summer because I learnt so much from*** you and I made many friends.****
Do you remember Sally, our good-looking classmate? He (She)? wrote to me last week and he (she)? told me that next month he (she)? would like to visit Spain. So, I’m organizing a tour around the country. First, we will go to Madrid and visit some of its most important monuments and restaurants. Then we will spend three days on the Costa del Sol enjoying of the beaches and the charm of the people there. Finally, I thought Asturias would be a good place to end our trip because of its amazing nature and unforgettable historical sites.
That´s all for now. Thanks for all. You and your family are invited to come to Spain, I would like to see you again soon.
Best wishes.
Fer
***You can learn something with someone if you are both learning together, otherwise it's better to say "I learnt so much when I was with you" or "I learnt so much from you"
****You were writing about 2 different time periods, the last 3 months (January, February, March, this year) and then you went on to write about last year. I'm not sure that that is what you wanted to do.
Email to my friend.
Hi Peter
Sorry for not writing earlier, but I have been very busy since I got back from the UK.
Thank you for your last email with all the photos of us and these last wonderful 3 months, I´m very happy with my trip to the UK last summer because I learnt very much (better: a lot) with you and I made many friends .
por lo menos en EEUU, decimos "the UK", o my trip to Great Britain (no necesitas "the")
Do you remember Sally, our good-looking classmate? He (<em>sally es siempre nombre de una chica, por lo menos nunca he escuchado un chico llamado así)</em> wrote me last week and he told me that next month he would like to visit Spain. So, I’m organizing a tour around the country. First, we will visit in Madrid some of its most important monuments and restaurants. (ententido pero extraño)
En vez de eso, escribe: First, we will visit Madrid and see some of its most important restaurants and monuments.
Then we will be three days in the Costa del Sol enjoying the beaches and the charm of the people there. Finally, I thought Asturias would be a good place to end our trip because of its amazing nature and unforgettable historical sites.
That´s all for now. Thanks for all. You and your family are invited to come to Spain, I would like to see you soon again.
Best wishes.
Fer
