Gene Zhang
过生日 明天是我的生日。我从公司请了假。我希望用这个时间放松而进步我的个人项目。
Apr 27, 2015 2:21 AM
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过生日

明天是我的生日。我向公司请了假。我希望利用这个时间可以放松一下,希望我的个人项目也能有所进步。ps:提前祝你生日快乐~

April 27, 2015
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过生日

明天是我的生日。我向\跟公司请了假。我希望用这个时间放松并且进步推进我的个人项目。

My understand is that you wanna relax and work on your personal project, hope it is correct.

Happy birthday to you in advance!

Good luck with your project as well!

\Lilly

April 27, 2015
I was confused because I did not know if ur personal project had sth to do with ur work. Since u have asked for leave on ur birthday and want to relax ur self, it is not logical that u will sth related to ur work at the same time. But if it means ur self-designed projects such as ur music composition or sth on ur hobbies, I think that would be more natural. Besides, I agree with Hunter, 进步 is not correct here. It is not a transitive verb in Chinese. We do not use 我们进步什么。Actually, we use 我们 使什么进步 or 我们完善什么,我们推进什么。So u can rewrite like this: 明天是我的生日。我向公司请了假,希望能利用这个时间放松一下,也抽点时间推进我的个人项目(丰富我的业余生活)。 words in the brackets are alternative. PS: Happy birthday!
April 28, 2015

过生日

明天是我的生日。我公司请了假。我希望用这个时间放松而进步完善我的个人(设计)项目。

 

总之,掌握得还是不错的。

注意,汉语当中的动词有一类叫做”离合词“,是不能够带宾语的。例如:”见面“、”结婚“等等,如果有兴趣,你可以联系我,给你仔细讲解一下。

April 28, 2015
“项目”在这里没错,但是“进步”作为动词时是离合词,是不能够带宾语的,所以要修改动词,可以用“完善我的个人设计项目“,这样就比较恰当了。
April 28, 2015
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