My Day

Today, I went to college with my friend, John. We took a bus. We talked about many things during the way to college. I asked him, "have you watched a movie called Hunger Games?" He said, "yeah! I watched only the first part of it. It was a deadly movie!" I felt happy because he liked it. Then, I happily said, "that's cool! Would you like to watch the rest of its movies?" He answered, "why not! That's would be great!" Now we reached the college. I was afraid that they might not allow him to enter the college because he isn't a student. --somehow he entered the dorm successfully-- After we entered the dorm, we took a few lectures and went home(my home). I was already downloading the movies. We decided to watch one movie and then watch the rest later. After finishing the movie, we were really exited to watch the rest. Finally, I told him to come tomorrow at the same time to watch them. He said that he would surely come. We said goodbye to each other, and then he left.

Help me to find my mistakes.

My Day

Today, I went to college with my friend, John. We took on a bus. We talked about many things during the our jorney to college. I asked him, "have you watched a movie called Hunger Games?" He said, "yeah! I watched only the first part of it. It was a deadly movie!" I felt happy because he liked it. Then, I happily said, "that's cool! Would you like to watch the rest of its movies?" He answered, "why not! That's would be great!" Now we reached to college. I was afraid that they might not allow him to enter the college because he isn't a student. --somehow he entered the dorm successfully-- After we entered the dorm, we took few lectures and went at home(my home). I was already downloaded the movies. We decided to watch one movie, and then watch the rest later. After finishing the movie, we were really exited to watch the rest. Finally, I told him to come tomorrow at the same time to watch them. He said that he would sure come. We said goodbye to each other, and then he left.

Help me to find my mistakes.