Выделяю ошибки красный, а стилистику синим.
The Way to a Dream
Next week, the results of DV-2016 will be announced. In This year, our family participated in the lottery for the first time. I hope we win. I want live in the USA, as do a lot of another people in the world. Of course, every country has its own problems and limitations. But is one way to decide is it your country or not that is being live here.?? [1] We never participated in the DV-lottery before, because we were satisfied with living in our native country. But now I want changes. I believe in that we can ensure a better future for our children in the USA. I also believe in destiny. If it is our destiny, we will surely win someday. Wish us luck :)
[1] Sorry, I couldn't understand this sentence. If you write it in Russian, or paraphrase in English, I'll try again to help.
And, good luck!