maddi
Informal mail Hello Robin, It was great to hear from you! I have been thinking about the plain you did, and it sounds good, so I'm going to join with you. I don't have to work in July, and I can't find more perfect plan than spent my holidays in a sports camp with your and your friends company. You asked me about which way to sleep I prefer. If I'm honest, I prefer stay in rooms, it is more confortable. Further, I don't know how to make a tent. With regard to the Spanish special food, I could cook you a potato omelet. It is very easy to cook, we don't need a lot of ingredients and it tastes really good. You know I would be happy doing anything in your city, but if I have to choose one thing, I would like to know your beautiful city in the morning and at night, I would like to go out and drink some beers while we are talking about our lives. Yes, I think its the best plan ever! I have to go, my friend is waiting for me. Let me know what you think!
Apr 27, 2015 4:24 PM
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Informal mail

Hello Robin,

It was great to hear from you!

I have been thinking about the plan you did made, and it sounds good, so I'm going to join with you. I don't have to work in July, and I can't find a more perfect plan than to spend my holidays in a sports camp with your and your friends for company.

You asked me about which way to sleep I prefer to sleep. If I'm honest, I prefer to stay in rooms, it is more comfortable. Furthermore, I don't know how to make a tent.

With regard to the Spanish special food, I could cook you a potato omelet. It is very easy to cook, we don't need a lot of ingredients and it tastes really good.

You know I would be happy doing anything in your city, but if I have to choose one thing, I would like to get to know your beautiful city in the morning and at night, I would like to go out and drink some beers while we are talking about our lives. Yes, I think it's the best plan ever!

I have to go, my friend is waiting for me.

Let me know what you think!

 

Well written! My corrections are in red and my suggestions to sound more natural are in blue/grey.

May 7, 2015
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