First attempt in writting Hiragana. きょう、わたし わ うれしい です。(Today I am happy. [I wish I could say "I am in a good mood" instead]) わたし の ねこ わ ねて うしろ の なか に わたし の のうとぱそこん。 (My cat is sleeping behind my

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First attempt in writting Hiragana. きょう、わたしわうれしい　です。(Today I am happy. [I wish I could say "I am in a good mood" instead]) わたし　の　ねこ　わ　ねてうしろのなかにわたしののうとぱそこん。 (My cat is sleeping behind my laptop.) わたし　わ　ＢＬＴ　を　たべています。(I ate a BLT.[I wish I could add "for lunch" afterwards but I don't know how.]) Please correct me on any mistakes! Feedback is extremely appreciated!

Apr 27, 2015 7:52 PM

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First attempt in writting Hiragana.

きょう、わたしはうれしい(/しあわせ)　です。(Today I am happy. [I wish I could say "I am in a good mood" instead])

"I am in a good mood" →わたし　は　きぶん　が　いいです(/わたし　は　げんきです/わたし　は　きげん　が　いいです)。

わたし　の　ねこ　は　ねてうしろのなかにわたしののーとぱそこん(/ノートパソコン)　の　うら　で　ねています。 (My cat is sleeping behind my laptop.)

わたし　は　おひるごはん　に　(/ちゅうしょく　に)　ＢＬＴ　を　たべました。(I ate a BLT.[I wish I could add "for lunch" afterwards but I don't know how.])

Please correct me on any mistakes! Feedback is extremely appreciated!

Very good:)

April 28, 2015

That is a good tip to help remember it! Thank you, again. c:

April 28, 2015

No problem, good luck with your studying! :)

April 28, 2015

Thank you! I bet you're right with that last sentence, too. It sounds like it would be correct that way.

April 28, 2015

The easiest rule to remember when thinking about "wa":s is that if it is part of a word, it's わ and if it's a particle (i.e topic marker) it is は! Also, because "ate" is past tense the correct way to end sentence is "tabemashita", "たべました" or once you get your kanji going "食べました". Also, I'm still a beginner but I'll give a shot at correcting the last sentence (with the "at/for lunch" added): 私は昼ごはんでBLTを食べました。 Which would be "Watashi wa hiru gohan de BLT o tabemashita." in romaji. Hope I could be of assistance, and as I said, I'm not very knowledgeable yet so I may have made some mistakes!

April 28, 2015

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