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Write about a decision which changed your life I can say that one of the most important decisions, or the most important decision in my life was taken by me one year ago, in August of 2014. In October of 2013 the doctors said me, after several exams, that I had a herniated disk on my back, this injury kept me on my bed during 8 months. In August of 2014 I went to see a surgeon in the University Hospital of Leon, he considered that the best solution for me was an operation. One month later, in the same hospital, a team of surgeons operated me with very good results. Several months after this, all pains have disappeared and again I can do a normal lifestyle. It for this act, that I consider this like the most important decision in my life.
Apr 27, 2015 9:19 PM
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Write about a decision which changed your life

I can say that one of the most important decisions, or the most important decision in my life was taken by me one year ago, in August of 2014.
In October of 2013 the doctors said  to me, after several exams, that I had a herniated disk in my back, this injury kept me on in my bed for during 8 months.
In August of 2014 I went to see a surgeon in the University Hospital of Leon, he considered that the best solution for me was an operation.


One month later, in the same hospital, a team of surgeons operated  on me with very good results.
Several months after this, all pains have disappeared, and again I can do lead a normal lifestyle. It for this act, that  having the surgery, I consider this like the most important decision in my life.

April 27, 2015
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Write about a decision which changed your life

I can say that one of the most important decisions, or the most important decision in my life, was taken by me one year ago, in August *(of) 2014.
In October (of) 2013 the doctors said told me, after several exams* examinations, that I had a herniated disk on in my back; this injury kept me on my bed during for 8 months.
In August (of) 2014 I went to see a surgeon in the University Hospital of Leon; he considered that the best solution for me was an operation.
One month later, in the same hospital, a team of surgeons operated on me with very good results.
Several months after this, all pains have disappeared, and *again I can do lead a normal life(style). *(It is) for this reason act, that I consider this like the most important decision in of my life.

*no need to write 'of', even though we say 'of' when the day of a date is stated  e.g. 25th August may be said as '25th of August'.

*examination is abbreviated to 'exam' when it refers to an academic or practical test, but this does not normally apply to a medical examination

*This is better rearranged as  ' . . and I can lead a normal life again'  or  ' . . and I can follow a normal lifestyle again'.

*better to write  'For this reason I consider this . . '

April 27, 2015
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