David
My friend Marie cooked very well. Hi , Today evening , I visited my friend Marie, she cooked very well , we ate salmon pink, some prawns, rice and wine. It was so good , yummy !!! We spent time to had lot of fun , sang et danced with her daugter .... All together has laughing so loud !! After that , I didnt have energy anymore. I fell asleep on the seat/sofa.Its was already 23h00 ( 11:00 pm).
Apr 28, 2015 12:42 AM
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</em>My friend Marie cooked very well.

Hi ,

Today  <em>Yesterday </em>evening , I visited my friend Marie. She cooked very well , we ate salmon pink <em>pink salmon som</em>e prawns, rice and wine. It was so good. Yummy !!!
We spent time to had lot of fun <em>had a lot of fun. We sang and </em> sang et danced with her daugter <em>daughter </em>....
All together has <em> </em><em>We were </em>laughing so loud! After that I didnt <em>didn't </em>have energy anymore. 

I fell asleep on the seat/sofa.Its <em>It</em> was <em>already</em> 23h00 ( 11:00 pm).

 

Good job I got what you were trying to say. Keep studying! 

April 28, 2015
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