My Birthday

Yesterday is was my birthday, but was also the Monday, so everybody had need to work.

Me I did too, but all my good friends remembered the day, so they gave me some a surprise to make me happy.

Thanks! (this is okay, but it is better to say "I am grateful" or "Thank you all!") 

Thanks to my parents for giving me life. Thanks to God for letting me meet so many good friends.

From them I get kinship, friendship, and student-teacher love. thanks Thank you!

I love you all.

Nice work! Keep working at it!