sentences practise

1. I borrowed some money to tide over until my paid day.
2. I desperately want to know my onions.*
3. My mom would have screamed with full delight when I left home. She wanted to be alone occupying home.
4. A lack of affection notmally comes from a lack of love.
5. When do you think is the best day for meeting ?

Corrections:

Practice Sentences

1. I borrowed some money to tide over until payday. (The day in which payment is recieved is usually called payday.)

2. I desperately want to know my onions. (Is this an expression? If it's not then you shouldn't personify or give human atributes to an object.)

3. My mom screamed with delight when I left home. She wanted to be by herself. 

4. A lack of affection notmally comes from a lack of love.
5. When do you think is the best day for meeting ?

Keep up the good work :)

-Abril

sentences practice

1. I borrowed some money to tide over until my paid day.

C: I borrowed some money to tide me over until payday.

<em>You never say "tide over".  It will always be "tide me over"</em>

examples: She ate food to tide her over until dinner. This will help tide you over.

2. I desperately want to know my onions.

<em>I don't know if you are saying options or opinion.  If it is options, your sentence is correct.  </em>

<em>If it is opinion:</em>

C: I desperately want to know your opinion.

3. My mom would have screamed with full delight when I left home. She wanted to be alone occupying home.

<em>The tense of this sentence is incorrect.  "would have" means something DIDN'T happen, but "when" means something DID happen</em>.

C1:  (Past) My mom would have screamed with delight if I had left home.  She wanted to have the house to herself.

C2: (Past) My mom screamed with delight when I left home.  She wanted to have the house to herself.

C3:  (future) My mom will scream with delight when I leave home.  She wants to have the house to herself.

4. A lack of affection normally comes from a lack of love.

<em>This sentence is good!</em>

5. When do you think is the best day for meeting ?

<em>This sentence is MAYBE correct.  This sentence is talking HYPOTHETICALLY.  You are just asking someone a question, NOT saying you "want to meet."</em>

<em>
</em>C: (Want to meet someone, and asking what day works for them) What is the best day for us to meet?

Good work!

sentences practise

1. I borrowed some money to tide over until my paid day.
2. I desperately want to know my opinions.
3. My mom would have screamed with full delight when I left home. She wanted to be alone occupying home. or She wanted to be alone in house occupied.
4. A lack of affection normally comes from lack of love.
5. When do you think is the best day for meeting?