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Find a tutor for ielts speaking skill I know that my weakness is not good at the pronuciation. So, I would need some guys who can help me improve it. Thank you very much.
Apr 28, 2015 1:25 PM
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Find a tutor for ielts speaking skill  I Am Looking For a Tutor

I know that my weakness is not good at the pronuciation. So, I would need some guys who can help me improve it.
Thank you very much.

I know that my pronunciation is not good, so I need someone to help me to improve it.

April 28, 2015
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Find Looking for a tutor for ielts speaking skill

I know that my weakness is bad  not good at the pronuciation. So, I would need some guys who can help me to improve it.
Thank you very much.

 

I can help you if you wish. Just take a look at my calendar and reserve a class with me. 

1. It is not enough just to type "find". You could fine "To find a tutor for ielts speaking skill", but I consider it's better to say "Looking for / Searching a tutor for ielts speaking skill" 

2. It sounds better "I know that my weakness is bad pronunciation" 

3. It's not necessary this "would"
4. you missed this "to"

 

Keep it up.  

April 28, 2015
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