Douglas Mendes
Series - Breaking Bad. Some Spoillers I watched in last week all five seasons, for some... amazing! And others a little mediocre. I believe to the Walter White is in true the finale representation of many people, who would wish be equal him, in begin a man passive, who had a cancer, and his family had no money to paid for your treatment. The true citizen good. And became possessive for money, murderer, liar, underhanded, which changed the life of family for make methamphetamine, who is good at something - Chemical - and use this skill to crime, to drugging others people, someone else will say: "Oh! If not for him to do, someone certainly would do", in this case include issues ethical of each individual. Although I liked of series, of plot, inteligence of the author, who made feel aversion to a character. My opinion, If is worthy of something, the ends doesn't justify the means. I will watch "Better Call Saul", which is a spin-off of series. Saul Goodman, lawyer of Walter White and Jesse Pinkman, became the main character. Share your if you whatched Breaking bad, and what you liked. Thanks.
Apr 28, 2015 1:38 PM
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<em>As I speak some Portuguese, it is fun for me to see how you make mistakes in English based on Brazilian Portuguese grammar! :)</em>

<em>Try to pay more attention to the usage in English, don't rely on the similarities between the languages. Some of your mistakes are easy to get rid of:</em>

<em>to like smth (not "like of smth")</em>

<em>"your" doesn't equal "his/her"! (not like "seu/sua" in Port.)</em>

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<em>I haven't corrected everything as I didn't understand the meaning of some sentences.</em>

<em>By the way, I noticed that "l", "f", "m" are often doubled in English, but are "single" in Portuguese. Your word "inteligence" reminded me of it.</em>

<em>The English "intelligence" equals the Portuguese "inteligência"</em>

<em>difficult - difícil</em>

<em>difference - diferença</em>

<em>immediately - imediatamente, etc.</em>

 

 

Series - Breaking Bad. Some Spoillers

I watched in last week all five seasons <em>(in English it is more natural to put "last week" either in the beginning of the sentence or the end of it)</em>, for some are... amazing! And others are a little mediocre.
I believe to the Walter White is in true the finale representation of many people, who would wish to be equal like him, in the beginnng a the man/guy was passive, who he had a cancer, and his family had no money to paid pay for your his treatment. The true citizen good <em>(not sure what you mean)</em>. And became possessive <em>(obsessive?)</em> for money, murderer, liar, underhanded, which changed the life of family for make methamphetamine, who is good at something - Chemicals/ chemistry - and uses this skill to for crime, to for drugging others people, someone else will say: "Oh! If he didin't do it not for him to do, someone certainly would do it", in this case include issues ethical of each individual.

Although I liked of the series, of the plot, the intelligence of the author, who made feel aversion to a character. My opinion, If it is worthy of something, the ends doesn't justify the means.

I will watch "Better Call Saul", which is a spin-off of series. Saul Goodman, lawyer of Walter White and Jesse Pinkman, became the main character.

Share your opinion if you whatched Breaking bad, and what you liked.

Thanks.

April 30, 2015
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