Kate Seungyeon
A car accident.. I had a car accident at the very late night on last Thursday, actually very early morning on Friday. I was coming back home after night work by taxi. A motorbike driver ignored the traffic light at the cross road and it crashed into the taxi that I was in.. I was sitting at the right side of back seat and wasn't wearing the seat belt. So I fell down to the left and my shoulder and head crashed into the door...ㅠㅠ Fortunately I didn't get serious injury but I was told that the motorbike driver died that few hours later. Though I was lucky enough, I will need to get some physical therapy until I recover entirely. Today I went to work for the first day after the accident and I felt really tired and more pain on my neck and left arm. I might go to hospital tomorrow morning. This is so frustrating.. I hope I recover very soon!
Apr 28, 2015 1:47 PM
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A Car Accident..

I had a car accident at the very late at  night on last Thursday, actually it was very early morning on Friday.
I was coming back returning home by taxi after night work by taxi. A motorbike driver ignored the traffic light at the cross road and it crashed into the taxi that I was in.. I was sitting at on the righthand side of the back seat and wasn't wearing the seat belt. So I fell down to the left and my shoulder and head crashed into the door...ㅠㅠ Fortunately I wasn't didn't get seriously injured, injury but I was told that the motorbike driver died that a few hours later. Though I was lucky enough, I will need to get some physical therapy until I recover entirely. Today I went to work for the first time day after the accident and I felt really tired and had more pain in my neck and left arm. I might go to hospital tomorrow morning. This is so frustrating.. I hope I recover very soon!

April 28, 2015
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A car accident..

I had a car accident at the very late night on last Thursday night, actually very early morning on Friday morning.
I was coming back home by taxi after night work (you chould also say "after working the night shift") by taxi. A motorbike driver ignored the traffic light at the cross road (I usually say "intersection" instead of "crossroad") and it crashed into the taxi that I was in.. I was sitting at the right side of back seat and wasn't wearing the seat belt. So I fell down to the left and my shoulder and head crashed into the door...ㅠㅠ Fortunately I didn't get a serious injury but I was told that the motorbike driver died that a few hours later. Though I was lucky enough, I will need to get some physical therapy until I recover entirely. Today I went to work for the first day after the accident and I felt really tired and had more pain on my neck and left arm. I might go to hospital tomorrow morning. This is so frustrating.. I hope I recover very soon!

 

Good Job. You're writing is very easy to understand. I made a few corrections that should help it to sound smoother. I hope you feel better soon. 

April 28, 2015

A car accident..

I had a car accident at the very late at night on last Thursday- actually very it was early morning on Friday. (It might be better here to just say it was early morning on Friday. But if you want to write in a free-flowing way, a dash indicates this a little better.)
I was coming back home by taxi after a night of work by taxi. A motorbike driver ignored the traffic light at the cross road interesection and it crashed into the taxi that I was in (it's understood from the last sentence that you are in the taxi). I was sitting at the right side of the backseat and wasn't wearing the a seat belt. So Upon impact (If you want to start a new sentece it's better to explain why you fell down. If you want to use so, it's better to use a comma and continue the previous sentence so there is a clear cause and effect),  I fell down to the left and my shoulder and head crashed into the door...ㅠㅠ Fortunately, I didn't get seriously injured but I was told that the motorbike driver died that a few hours later. Though I was lucky to survive enough, I will need to get some physical therapy until I recover entirely. Today I went to work for the first day time after the accident and I felt really tired, and more with pain on in my neck and left arm. I might go to the hospital tomorrow morning. This is so frustrating.. I hope I recover very soon!

May 20, 2015
I hope you feel better soon.
April 28, 2015

A car accident..

I was in a car accident very late on Thursday evening, actually it was very early Friday morning. 
I was going home by a taxi after a night at work and a motorbike driver ignored the traffic light at the cross road and it crashed into the taxi that I was in. I was sitting in the right side of the back seat and wasn't wearing a seat belt, so I fell down on my shoulder and my head crashed into the door. Fortunately I wasn't seriously injured but I was told that the motorbike driver died a few hours later. Although I was lucky enough, I will need some physical therapy until I recover entirely. Today I went to work for the first time since the accident and I felt really tired and had pain in my neck and left arm, I might go to hospital tomorrow morning. This is so frustrating, I hope I recover very soon!

April 28, 2015
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