Task 1. IELTS.

Hey! I'm preparing for IELTS right now. Could you check my task 1 and tell me my mistakes. What should I add or remove from the text? What linking words can I add etc.

The pictures show the mechanism of obtaining energy through wind turbines. The process starts when wind pushes against the fiberglass or wood blades. After that, the wind causes the blades to rotate. Rotation of the turbine generates electricity using an electric generator. As a result the generator creates an output of 1.5 megawatts. In addition, this mechanism is installed at the top of a large steel tower.

Furthermore wind turbines include a wind sensor connected to the generator, which helps to observe results. This is displayed on a computer, which is located in a control room. In practice, this sensor could register some features of the wind, be it angle, direction of the wind or some indicators of electrical energy. As for the location of wind farms, they can be placed in an optimal position on the peaks of mountains, where wind has maximum speed, or in the sea near a coastline.

Nevertheless, there are domestic wind turbine technologies out there. Despite the little size, they can be used to power the entire house and to ensure electrical energy with an output of 100 kilowatts.

Well done that was an excellently written piece. Pay close attention to the plural / singular and articles needed throughout. Overall a good effort!