My house, my dream...

One of my dreams is to have my own house . so that, therefore, my goal after finishing my studies is to work hard to achieve that. I would like to decorate it , to buy the fornitures, by buying furniture; the dishes and everything a house needs. I perfectly know that when you are in charge of your home and live alone you have many responsabilities too, so you need to orginize organise/organize yourself in order to do the shopping, the cleaning, the dishes, the vacuuming, the laundry, and so on. Every time I think about that it I immediately get excited!. I absolutely wish it indeed.

Very good, however sometimes your expression is a bit confusing as you try to develop advanced sentences. Maybe stick to doing simple ones confidently, then move onto advanced structures :)

My house, my dream...

One of my dreams is to have my own house. so that, my goal after finishing my studies is to work hard to achieve that. I would like to decorate it, to buy the furnitures, the dishes and everything a house needs. I perfectly know that when you are in charge of your home and live alone you have many responsabilities too, so you need to orginize yourself in order to do the shopping, the cleaning, the dishes, the vacuuming, the laundry, and so on. every time I think about that and I will immediately get excited about it/for it!. I absolutely wish it indeed.