A quarrel(Could you correct the mistakes please?) Today was a usual day.The weather was so nice,sunny and warm.The trees are putting on their green dresses.And the nature eventually is waking up.I was

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A quarrel(Could you correct the mistakes please?) Today was a usual day.The weather was so nice,sunny and warm.The trees are putting on their green dresses.And the nature eventually is waking up.I was on my way to work.I usually go to work by underground.Today it was so crowded.I entered the train and after me there was a woman who collected money for sick children.I see her every day.She says that she's a volunteer,and has all necessary approving documents.There was another woman in the train ,just a passanger.When she saw that volunteer she got so mad that she began yelling at her and said that she was a lier.They even tried to fight.Luckily two men separated them.Then there was silence.Everyone was looking at the volunteer accusingly and nobody gave her money.

Apr 28, 2015 8:04 PM

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A Quarrel (Could you correct the mistakes please?)

Today was a typical day. The weather was so nice, sunny, and warm.The trees are putting on their green dresses. And the nature finally is waking up. I was on my way to work. I usually go to work by underground. Today it was so crowded. I entered the train, and after me there was a woman who was collecting money for sick children. I see her every day. She says that she's a volunteer, and has all necessary documents of approval. There was another woman on the train -- just a passenger. When she saw the volunteer, she got so mad that she began yelling at her, and said that she was a liar. They even attempted to fight. Luckily, two men separated them. Then there was silence. Everyone was looking at the volunteer accusingly, and nobody gave her money.