A friend's Treason It's said that friends love each other, care for each other, advocate each other, but betray each other!? When I was 16 years old, I had a friend named Ali. We were neighbors, but w

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A friend's Treason It's said that friends love each other, care for each other, advocate each other, but betray each other!? When I was 16 years old, I had a friend named Ali. We were neighbors, but we never actually talked to each other. One day, we met in a coffee network-gaming. The coffee was near my house and Ali's. After a few chatting, we became friends. Ali became my best friend, and I was spending all my time with his company. Years passed, and we grew up. But, unfortunately, our friendship became without ties. Merely two friends with no rational reason to stay with each other. One day, he took the piss of me with his new friends. He asked me to come to a park near our houses. His friends were there too. When I went, his friends began saying things about me. I was wondering how they knew about these matters since I had told anyone about them, but Ali. I looked at Ali, and he was like someone who trying to hold his laughing. Then, I knew that he was the one who told them. When I was walking to leave the park, they laughed out loud so I could hear them. After that, he never messaged me or called me again. I knew that he was planing that from the very beginning. Consequently, I decided not to give anyone my confidence.

May 2, 2015 10:19 PM

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A Friend's Treason

It's said that friends love each other, care for each other and advocate each other. But to betray each other!? When I was 16 years old, I had a friend named Ali. We were neighbors, but we never actually talked to each other. One day, we met in a coffee network-gaming, which was nearby to our houses. After a few <a id="_GPLITA_0" style="border: none !important; display: inline-block !important; text-indent: 0px !important; float: none !important; font-weight: bold !important; height: auto !important; margin: 0px !important; min-height: 0px !important; min-width: 0px !important; padding: 0px !important; text-transform: uppercase !important; text-decoration: underline !important; vertical-align: baseline !important; width: auto !important; background: transparent !important;" title="Click to Continue > by eDeals" href="#">chatting</a>, we became friends. Ali became my best friend, and I was spending spent all of my time with in his company.

Years passed, and we grew up. But, unfortunately, our friendship became without ties strained. We became Merely two friends with no rational reason to stay with each other. One day, he took the piss out of me with his new friends. He asked me to come to a park near our houses, and when I went, his friends were there too. (When I went,) They friends began saying things about me. I was wondering how they knew about these matters things since I had told anyone nobody about them, except for Ali. I looked at Ali, and he was looked like someone who was trying to hold back his laughing laughter. Then, I knew that he was the one who had told them. When I was walking to leave the park, they laughed out loud so I could hear them. After that, he never messaged me or called me again. I knew that he was planing that had been planning it from the very beginning. Consequently, I decided not to give anyone my confidence.

May 3, 2015

Thanks you a lot. And yeah, that's what I'm doing. Practicing more and more.

May 3, 2015

Very well-written and quite touching! You write English very well. Keep practicing and you'll become better and more proficient! Don't forget to add paragraphs to long stories like this, otherwise they can become difficult to read. :)

May 3, 2015