陳晉豪
English class This afternoon, I went to English class,teacher asked who should get the presentation today,but the person who was absented, and teacher started to search someone to replace,when he looked at me I immediately knew I could't escape. But actually, I gladded to do this, because I have the chance to practice me English, but a little bit imperfect is that teacher did't correct me when I speak wrong words or grammar, I understood he just want to build our confidence, but in my view, I want to know what the mistake I made,otherwise, I will keep using the wrong way.
May 3, 2015 12:47 PM
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English class

This afternoon, I went to English class. My teacher asked who should get the presentation will present today, but the person who was absented today's presenter was absent, and so my teacher started to search someone to replace,wWhen he looked at me, I immediately knew I could't escape. But actually To be honest, I gladded am glad to do this, because since I have the chance to practice me my English,. but a little bit imperfect is that On the other hand, my teacher didn't correct me when I speak said wrong words or grammar,. I understood understand he just want wanted to build our confidence, but in my view opinion, I want to know what the mistake I made,oOtherwise, I will keep using the wrong way.

 

Chinese typing doesn't really use spaces, but English needs a space after every word or word with a punctuation (words with ' and " are a little more of a special case), so keep that in mind. It's great that you're pushing to improve your English, so good luck! I know that student-teacher relationships are different between Asia and the US, so I'm not sure if this would work in your situation, but you can privately ask your teacher about your mistakes in your presentation.

May 3, 2015
This was well written. Just remember that written English is different from spoken English, so don't necessarily write down things in exactly the same way as you'd speak them. Well done! Keep practicing! :)
May 3, 2015

English class

This afternoon, I went to English class, <em>and my </em>teacher asked <em>us</em> who should get the presentation <em>was going to present </em>today. <em>B</em>ut the person who was absented <em>absent</em>, and teacher started <em>was starting </em>to search <em>for </em>someone to replace <em>a replacement </em>when he looked at me. I immediately knew I could<em>n</em>'t escape. But actually, I <em>was</em> gladded to do this, because I have <em>had </em>the chance to practice me <em>my</em> English<em>. B</em>ut a little bit imperfect <em>the flip side </em>is that teacher did<em>n</em>'t correct me when I speak <em>spoke the </em>wrong words or <em>used the wrong</em> grammar. I understood <em>understand that </em>he just want <em>wanted </em>to build our confidence, but in my view, I want to know what the mistake<em>s</em> I made <em>were</em>, otherwise, I will keep using <em>English in</em> the wrong way.

May 3, 2015
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