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Topic: Tomorrow Night (내일 밤) Points to Include: Future Tense Object Marking Particles And, and then, therefore, so (그리고, 그래서) And, With (하고, (이)랑) Days of the Week But, However (그런데, 그렇지만) To “someone,” from “someone” (한테, 한테서) 내일밤 저는 집에 있을거예요. 집에 있을거여요 그리고 우리 엄마가 요리할거예요. 엄마 요리하는 때문에, 저의 친구들는 집에가 오고싶어요. 그래서, 저는 친구가 전화를 해요. 나중에, 친구들랑 영화를 볼거예요 그리고 언니는 생일위해 선물을 살거예요. 그렇지만 일요일까지, 언니한테 선물가 안 주해요. 언니의 생일이 일요이예요, 그리고 오늘 목요일만 그래서 내일밤은 금요일이에요. 일요일는 언니에게 저한테서 선물을 주할거예요. Eng Ver.: Tomorrow night I will be at home. I’ll be at home and my mother will cook. Because mom will cook, my friends will want to come over (to my house). Therefore, I will call my friends. Later on, I will see a movie with my friends and I will buy my sister a present for her birthday. However, until Sunday I will not give my sister her present. My sister’s birthday is on Sunday and today is only Thursday, therefore tomorrow night is Friday. Sunday I will give my sister her birthday present from me. please edit and give feedback. =(ㅅ_ㅅ)=
May 4, 2015 12:54 AM
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Topic: Tomorrow Night (내일 밤)

Points to Include:
Future Tense
Object Marking Particles
And, and then, therefore, so (그리고, 그래서)
And, With (하고, (이)랑)
Days of the Week
But, However (그런데, 그렇지만)
To “someone,” from “someone” (한테, 한테서)

내일_밤 저는 집에 있을_거예요. 저는 집에 있을_요. 그리고 우리 엄마가 요리할_거예요. 엄마 요리하 때문에, 저의 친구들 우리 집에 오고_싶어요. 그래서, 저는 친구들에게 전화를 할 거예요. 나중에, 친구들랑 영화를 볼_거예요. 그리고 언니 생일위해 선물을 살_거예요. 그렇지만 일요일까지, 언니한테 선물주해줄 거예요. 언니 생일 일요요, 그리고 오늘 목요일만 그래서이고 내일_밤은 금요일이에요. 일요일는 언니에게 저한테 선물을 주할줄_거예요.

Eng Ver.:
Tomorrow night I will be at home. I’ll be at home and my mother will cook. Because mom will cook, my friends will want to come over (to my house). Therefore, I will call my friends. Later on, I will see a movie with my friends and I will buy my sister a present for her birthday. However, until Sunday I will not give my sister her present. My sister’s birthday is on Sunday and today is only Thursday, therefore tomorrow night is Friday. Sunday I will give my sister her birthday present from me.

please edit and give feedback. =(ㅅ_ㅅ)=


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May 4, 2015
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