English day 8th Ok, now I have a transcript of my presentation and I have a problem is I don't know where need to pause in a sentense. So, could anyone give me a hand please! So many thanks! Each

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English day 8th Ok, now I have a transcript of my presentation and I have a problem is I don't know where need to pause in a sentense. So, could anyone give me a hand please! So many thanks! Each our body is a biology machine. Everyday, we eat food and drink water to take nutritions and energy for our lives. But I am not sure about what is matter with you if you unfortunately eat contaminated food and drink. Poor you! Nowadays people are getting more and more concerned about their health. Because they warned that there are many many food hygiene and safety scandals of many many firms on the TV, newspapers, radio, everywhere and everyday. The latest case occurred in February 2015, there is a fly in Tan Hiep Phat’s product. Immediately, Tan Hiep Phat fallen into serious crisis brand. They faced to strong reaction of the customers who were turning their back on all Tan Hiep Phat’s products. So, what did Tan Hiep Phat do to handle this challenge? Before this new was published, they had a negotiation: Tan Hiep Phat, after negotiations, agreed to pay VND500 million to Minh in exchange for his silence. But the company later reported the case to the police. Branding experts believe that Tan Hiep Phat company didn’t make the right move when managing risk in the widely publicized VND500-million housefly case, which involved a customer who demanded money in exchange for keeping quiet after allegedly finding a fly in a beverage bottle. In the current case Tan Hiep Phat decided to “punish consumers”, which is not what a professional branding business should do. In the same time, the other scandals related to Tan Hiep Phat food safety in 2009, 2011 and 2012, which were thought to have been forgotten, have once again appeared in local newspapers. As a result, thousands of people are calling for a boycott of a popular soft drink after all. Pages have been opened on Facebook to generate support for the boycott of "Number One" and other products made by the Tan Hiep Phat company, with thousands of "likes" to date. This is too bad effect which any company doesn’t want. Therefore, we have a good experience to next our company challenge: Always put our customers in satisfaction!

May 4, 2015 2:26 AM

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English day 8th

Ok, now I have a transcript of my presentation and the problem is I don't know where I need to pause in a sentence. So, could anyone give me a hand please! So many thanks!

Our bodies are biological machines. Everyday, we eat food and drink water for nutrition and energy for our lives. But I am not sure about what is matter with you if you unfortunately eat contaminated food and drink. Poor you!

Nowadays people are getting more and more concerned about their health. They are warned that there are many many food, hygiene and safety scandals regarding many many firms on the TV, newspapers and radio, everywhere and everyday. (I would state this as "they are warned frequently by the media everyday about food safety scandals")

The latest case occurred in February 2015, when a fly was found in Tan Hiep Phat’s product. Immediately, Tan Hiep Phat fell into a serious brand crisis. They faced a strong reaction of the customers who were turning their back on all Tan Hiep Phat’s products.

So, what did Tan Hiep Phat do to handle this challenge?
Before this new was published, they had a negotiation: Tan Hiep Phat, after negotiations, agreed to pay VND500 million to Minh in exchange for his silence, but the company later reported the case to the police. Branding experts believe that Tan Hiep Phat company didn’t make the right move when managing risk in the widely publicized VND500-million housefly case, which involved a customer who demanded money in exchange for keeping quiet after allegedly finding a fly in a beverage bottle. In the current case Tan Hiep Phat decided to “punish consumers”, which is not what a professional branding business should do.

In the same time, the other scandals related to Tan Hiep Phat food safety in 2009, 2011 and 2012, which were thought to have been forgotten, have once again appeared in local newspapers.
As a result, thousands of people are calling for a boycott of a popular soft drink after all.
Pages have been opened on Facebook to generate support for the boycott of "Number One" and other products made by the Tan Hiep Phat company, with thousands of "likes" to date.

This is a bad effect which any company doesn’t want. Therefore, we have a good experience with the next our company challenge: Always satisfy our customers!

Good job. If you are reading this out loud, just stop briefly after periods and pause after commas. Good luck.

May 4, 2015

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