Please revise my writing. TOPIC: The kind of music I like There are various musics in the world. For instance, classic, pop, rock, country and others. But all of them, I like pop music. Pop music is a

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Please revise my writing. TOPIC: The kind of music I like There are various musics in the world. For instance, classic, pop, rock, country and others. But all of them, I like pop music. Pop music is a genre of popular music, which originated in its modern form in the 1950s and 1960s, deriving from rock and roll. The lyrics of modern pop songs typically focus on simple themes – often love and romantic relationships. Therefore, listening to music makes me happy and plesant in my life. Some favorite pop songs I like such as : “Miss you”, “A little love”,… I'm planning on burning a CD, buying some to listen in my free time.Pop music is like true friend, in happy, merry and woe times it will together. For example when i listen to music i forget a bit about problems and sorrows. Besides, each culture has various form of music. By listening or looking at the music a common people can guess what types of culture. I’m a Vietnamese and I also proud of our pop songs of many singers such as Ho Ngoc Ha, Thu Minh,…In summary,I love pop music and I would say that, Music is an inseparable part of this world.

May 4, 2015 4:11 AM

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There are various different types of music in the world. For instance, classic, pop, rock, country, and others. But out of all of them, I like pop music the most. Pop music is a subgenre of popular music, which originated in its modern form in the 1950s and 1960s, derived from rock and roll. The lyrics of modern pop songs typicall focus on simple themes - often love and romantic relationships. This is why listening to music makes me happy, and I find it pleasant. Some of my favourite pop songs are: "Miss You", "A little love". I'm planning on burning a CD and buying some to listen to in my free time. Pop music is like my true friend, it's happy, merry, and with sad times it will be with me. Like how when I listen to music I forget about my problems and sorrows a bit. Also, each culture has their own various types of music. By listening or looking at the music someone can guess what culture you are from. I'm vietnamese and I am proud of our pop songs by our many singers such as Ho Ngoc Ha, THu minh, etc.. In summary, I love pop music, and I would say that music is an inseparable part of this world.

May 4, 2015

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